Dear Julie, This is wonderful. ("upon" is spelled with a "u". "U" know that, I'm sure.) I would have called it "Once Upon a Time", but it doesn't matter. The...
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please tell me what you guys think I'm trying to step up my game so constructive critics show me your sword. if you have time on easter sunday come down to...
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-A New Beginning- The Earth warms to the rays of the Sun, Dew glistening on the yellow rose, Chest puffed up, the rooster chants his crows, A glorious, new day...
Whoa. Here it is a WHOLE YEAR later. And I am STILL not home. *chuckles* But, I can get a bit of email now. Truly, the conditions for military people...
It's been so long since I've been gone. Life takes up so much space! It's easy to forget what memories beget when caught up in the race. How I've yearned and...
Oh, yeah! I can SOOOO relate to this! Being bound to the past is so limiting. But the choice to live shall set us free =) *chuckles* of course, you just...
I don't think I've ever seen such a shift within a single work. The first half -- a happy memory. The second half -- the threat of memories lost. I must...
... SO true! How much wisdom can be found in a simple poem! I, too, enjoy learning in such a fashion. ... Young harvest the wise. Old can harvest the wise...
Well, though I've been away for so long, I would still like to welcome you here. From experience past, there are few truer or more honest friends than you...
Chaindove! I am so glad to see you're still writing and coming up with such touching poems. Your poems have always been a source of speculation for me, an...
Love the rhythm! THis reminds me of how, at times, it seems life conspires to leave you out of itself. Everything feels against you, like you're the clown,...
In Iraq, there are many worried children. I SO agree! Some people are so quick to instill "reality" into their children they never allow their children to be...
I, personally, have never experienced such levels of pain as you describe, but I have witnessed others. I've known those so secluded in their "house of pain"...
A rejection? An attempt to atone, denied? Some simply choose not to forgive. But never give up, you say. Maybe I got it all wrong, hehe. Hope not =)...
This may be totally off the wall, but this makes me think of my sister. She has, at times, turned to hurting herself. She says sometimes it is easier to hurt...
. . . to jump into such creativity again =) I've seen some quality stuff tonight, and hope to see yet more. But, time for tonight is up, so I wish you all a...
Thanks for the kind comments, Dave. If your sister, at times, has hurt herself like me, I think you should try to see what's going on, and try to help her out...
Ok, now I know who you are. I am also an old one. Previously going under the name of disate, chiraz_22 and duagth. What happened to the pyschology studies? ...
I really enjoyed this poem, Dave. The longing, but then the subsquent internal peace as it is realised that: "But the thing about home is that it always...
I am absolutely hopeless at Haiku, so I am not one to help you with critique of your poems. However, below is a resource which you may find helpful. cheers, ...
Written thirty years ago, and the theme and emotions are still true today. It could have been written thirty thousand years ago and it would still ring true....
-Epilepsy- Tiny exploding stars in the brain, shaking and writhing, out of control, a short circuit breaking the chain, on the body, it takes a hard toll. ...
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