A Dallas Cowboys blanket has to be a Texas kigo for fall or winter:
sitting on my hands
under our Cowboys blanket
she snuggles closer
opie
--- In kigohotline@yahoogroups.com, "Ella W." <ellawagemakers@...> wrote:
>
> In the Veluwe, one of our national parks, it's mating season for the deer, and
foraging season for the wild boar who are starting to prepare for winter. We
took a 2.5-hr. walk there Friday evening, waiting for their calls.
> Â
> autumn stars
> as deep in the woods
> stags hunt
> Â
> my hands
> warm in my pockets
> ... the calls of stags
> Â
> through the dark
> of the autumn evening
> deer tracks
> Â
> Ella
>
> From: Heike Gewi <heike_gewi@...>
> To: "kigohotline@yahoogroups.com" <kigohotline@yahoogroups.com>
> Sent: Sunday, 25 September 2011, 13:27
> Subject: Re: [kigohotline] Re: warming hands
>
>
> Â
>
> ;-))))))
>
>
> air con coolness
>
> too old for all the stars
> I fall asleep
>
>
> H.
>
> Von: opieh <ohouston1@...>
> An: kigohotline@yahoogroups.com
> Gesendet: 12:35 Sonntag, 25.September 2011
> Betreff: [kigohotline] Re: warming hands
>
>
> Â
> I was hoping the warming of the hands and the connotation of zoka as coffee
would suffice as an implied kigo, but I do see that a more specific kigo and a
bigger hint regarding the poem's message is called for. Hopefully, this
revision will bring the elements of creation and intent together, and it nails
the kigo:
>
> zoka morning
> warming hands...
> for Valentine
>
> opie
>
> --- In kigohotline@yahoogroups.com, Greve Gabi <gokurakuatworldkigo@> wrote:
> >
> > Dear Opieh,
> > do you have a HTML to share with "warming hands" as kigo? or a book
> > where you found it?
> >
> > Or do you want to suggest it as a new kigo for Texas?
> > In this case, which season would you suggest for it? Autumn? Winter?
> > Spring? All the three ?
> >
> > Gabi
> >
> >
> > > opieh wrote:
> > >
> > > "warming hands" ist ein kigo.
> > >
> >
> > > > > > zoka morning...
> > > > > > warming hands
> > > > > > and haiku
> > > > > >
> > > > > > opie
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Dear Opie
> > > > > >
> > > > > > maybe introduce a kigo to your poem in line 1 ?
> > > > > >
> > > > > > autumn morning...
> > > > > > warming hands
> > > > > > and haiku
> > > > > >
> >
> > > > > > Gabi
> >
>