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Re: warming hands

A Dallas Cowboys blanket has to be a Texas kigo for fall or winter:

sitting on my hands
under our Cowboys blanket
she snuggles closer

opie

--- In kigohotline@yahoogroups.com, "Ella W." <ellawagemakers@...> wrote:
>
> In the Veluwe, one of our national parks, it's mating season for the deer, and
foraging season for the wild boar who are starting to prepare for winter.  We
took a 2.5-hr. walk there Friday evening, waiting for their calls.
>  
> autumn stars
> as deep in the woods
> stags hunt
>  
> my hands
> warm in my pockets
> ... the calls of stags
>  
> through the dark
> of the autumn evening
> deer tracks
>  
> Ella
>
> From: Heike Gewi <heike_gewi@...>
> To: "kigohotline@yahoogroups.com" <kigohotline@yahoogroups.com>
> Sent: Sunday, 25 September 2011, 13:27
> Subject: Re: [kigohotline] Re: warming hands
>
>
>  
>
> ;-))))))
>
>
> air con coolness
>
> too old for all the stars
> I fall asleep
>
>
> H.
>
> Von: opieh <ohouston1@...>
> An: kigohotline@yahoogroups.com
> Gesendet: 12:35 Sonntag, 25.September 2011
> Betreff: [kigohotline] Re: warming hands
>
>
>  
> I was hoping the warming of the hands and the connotation of zoka as coffee
would suffice as an implied kigo, but I do see that a more specific kigo and a
bigger hint regarding the poem's message is called for. Hopefully, this
revision will bring the elements of creation and intent together, and it nails
the kigo:
>
> zoka morning
> warming hands...
> for Valentine
>
> opie
>
> --- In kigohotline@yahoogroups.com, Greve Gabi <gokurakuatworldkigo@> wrote:
> >
> > Dear Opieh,
> > do you have a HTML to share with "warming hands" as kigo? or a book
> > where you found it?
> >
> > Or do you want to suggest it as a new kigo for Texas?
> > In this case, which season would you suggest for it? Autumn? Winter?
> > Spring? All the three ?
> >
> > Gabi
> >
> >
> > > opieh wrote:
> > >
> > > "warming hands" ist ein kigo.
> > >
> >
> > > > > > zoka morning...
> > > > > > warming hands
> > > > > > and haiku
> > > > > >
> > > > > > opie
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Dear Opie
> > > > > >
> > > > > > maybe introduce a kigo to your poem in line 1 ?
> > > > > >
> > > > > > autumn morning...
> > > > > > warming hands
> > > > > > and haiku
> > > > > >
> >
> > > > > > Gabi
> >
>





Mon Sep 26, 2011 5:56 pm

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Dear Opieh, do you have a HTML to share with "warming hands" as kigo? or a book where you found it? Or do you want to suggest it as a new kigo for Texas? In...
Greve Gabi
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Sep 25, 2011
3:19 am

I was hoping the warming of the hands and the connotation of zoka as coffee would suffice as an implied kigo, but I do see that a more specific kigo and a...
opieh
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Sep 25, 2011
9:35 am

;-)))))) air con coolness too old for all the stars I fall asleep H. ________________________________ Von: opieh <ohouston1@...> An:...
Heike Gewi
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Sep 25, 2011
11:27 am

In the Veluwe, one of our national parks, it's mating season for the deer, and foraging season for the wild boar who are starting to prepare for winter.  We...
Ella W.
ellawagemakers Offline Send Email
Sep 26, 2011
5:12 pm

A Dallas Cowboys blanket has to be a Texas kigo for fall or winter: sitting on my hands under our Cowboys blanket she snuggles closer opie...
opieh
opieh2003 Offline Send Email
Sep 26, 2011
5:56 pm

THAT is haiku and brings even the fun back to read and write. Opie's "sitting on my hands" ;-))))) and Ella's "the hunting stags" the double meaning is quiet...
Heike Gewi
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Sep 27, 2011
9:22 am

Domo....Heike-san.....opie...
opieh
opieh2003 Offline Send Email
Sep 27, 2011
6:23 pm

Dear Opie san, Kudos to you for trying! It takes most people years to write good haiku, so by trying and taking advice you will make good progress. As a non...
Isabelle Prondzynski
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Sep 25, 2011
7:34 pm

Actually, the original thought was to invoke the zoka gods of creativity with the hot Zoka brand cup of coffee, to help me write a haiku. However, since the...
opieh
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Sep 25, 2011
8:23 pm

Gabi, as I mentioned on an earlier post, I prefer to write implied season words, rather than canned ones, and I have been convinced here that "warming hands"...
opieh
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Sep 26, 2011
1:37 am

Dear opie, well, in the saijiki, there are no "implied" kigo, only definitive ones. (Their translation into English can be this or that, but still ... they...
Greve Gabi
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Sep 26, 2011
1:46 am
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