Hello, Wolfie. Nice to meet you. Welcome to the gruop. You've come to the place for friends, we are sort of a family here. Waiting to hear from ya! -debrah....
Ha ha!! Ha! Making me laugh! And we would never stare threateningly here. Yah Peter, you will be glad to know you fit right in from the start!! Yes, you've...
Okay, - nodding in an edified manner - it is good. I can see it happening, but there are some places where it moves a bit to fast, from one paragraph to...
Yup, yup..I know it..the indention dishapearace, I mean. I have found nothing to cure it, and I am a website designer. *sigh* Believe it or not, there is a...
can't wait, Deb Bonnie ... Do you Yahoo!? Yahoo! Tax Center - File online, calculators, forms, and more [Non-text portions of this message have been removed]...
nitey nite Bonnie Kathryn Evergrace <kevergrace@...> wrote: Well Good People, I am beyond tired. So I bid you ado. I love you all, and I shall read more...
thanks Kathryn I made the corrections necessary to this piece. Good pointers. Bonnie Kathryn Evergrace <kevergrace@...> wrote: Bonnie, With this chapter...
oh yeah, the Lo-ans' rel, I hate it when it puts something else before it. For some reason, the posting hates my race lol. Bonnie "Debrah A. Ballard"...
man, even with this updated piece, I've still updated even more lol, but I did make the corrections you suggested. Thanks again. Bonnie Kathryn Evergrace...
Thank you for the warm welcome. I hope to be a productive and useful member. WOLFIE ... __________________________________________________ Do you Yahoo!? ...
Ah! My first critique! Should I do a Dorothy Parker and trash your work in a cruel but entertaining manner, or... um... just review it properly? Aw. No fair. ...
Hello, This is a new draft. I am hoping that my character gets introduced well, but as of late my writing has been for the dogs, so we'll see. Kathryn...
"Ho-ho! Don't worry Huno! You'll get your own hardware store one day. He's so cute! Anyway, Vic," Wow! Thanks for your warm words of welcome! I have a slightly...
LOL I like your comments within the story. Very helpful inputs there. And the little ending you "inproved" on so to speak after the story. Very funny. ha ha....
hmmm that's strange. I was sure I haven't read your story yet lol. but thanks for the cheers (clicks glasses) Peter Evans <dreaming_lad@...> wrote: ...
Ag! Of course, it was Debrah who wrote the critique. I hang my head in shame. Sorry, Debrah, and thanks once again for your critique. Much appreciated. Get...
LOL. well, let me see if I can locate your story in the messages so I can print it out and read it properly and drink some sparkling cyder lol I'll be posting...
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Hello Debrah, I'm sorry that my comments are not interweaved into your story. I'm babysitting and this ladies computer is funny, it won't allow me to do that....
Righto! Good visuals, I can picture this room and the people nicely. No unnecessary description, so well done there. Good work setting up the scene before the...
did I totally miss out on a story Deb posted or what? Hey Deb, did you post something? Bonnie ... Do you Yahoo!? Yahoo! Tax Center - File online, calculators,...
Peter, Your chapters have 3,500-4,000 words! In that case yes, please cut them into smaller bits for us. I'm looking forward to reading your stuff. Wonder...
ROTFLMAS! Kathryn ... Do you Yahoo!? Yahoo! Tax Center - File online, calculators, forms, and more [Non-text portions of this message have been removed]...
oh ok. phew! Bonnie "Debrah A. Ballard" <debrahballard@...> wrote:Nah, not yet. I haven't posted. I am still trying to write the cursed thing again....
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