Those ideas sound really good can I see them in the story? especially the cacti? Ooh what kind of spels on them? What lives in the labrynth? Kathryn Evergrace...
the possibilities for the story are endless! I love it! I can't wait to see what your version of the cave will look like. And the cacti! That should be fun for...
I think novels under 100 pages are called "Novellas", if it's over 100 pages then it's considered a novel :) which is why I like aiming for the long chapters...
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU, HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU, HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEAR kATHRYN, HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOUOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! HOW MANY MORE :) LOL Bonnie ... Do you Yahoo!?...
The gray skinned little humonculos come carefully scampering out with birthday cake and lit candles screeching in it's caterwauling way HAPY BRTHDAY HAPY...
Master Wisdom, who is standing nearby, reaches out a hand and catches the little humonculos, and pets gently on the head. He then whisperes in its ear "is your...
I've just have a few suggestions about when your characters speak, use two quotation marks instead of one. And when someone is speaking someone else's words,...
I have to admit, I was fascinated with this one, yeah, torture torture! oops did I say that? I didnt' mean too. (Wisdom shakes his head in the background,...
The little gray skinned humonculos smiles pointing offscreen to a black robed figure stnding in shadows then shivers nervously as it scrambles away as the...
Quietly, wisdom watches the little creature run off, and slips down the corridor that the robed figure had vanished down. "I wish to speak to you," he says to...
"Thanxssss" hisses the black robed firgure as it faades away with the scroll as the little gray skinned humonculos scampers into the corridor and shakes his...
"I wish to meet you," Wisdom responds, lighting up the corridor with his sapphire crystal staff. "If you think you're so secret, you have yet to meet me!" ... ...
I made some corrections, but it was very good. I loved the action Bonnie The Illiarrien sentries were uneasy in at their posts. The night and the forest were...
The little gray skinned humonculos comes riding out onto the scene on one of Debrah's rats "WOW THEY ARE HUGE!!!!!! YIPPEE!!!!!!! YEEHAW!!!! RIDE EM COWBOY!!...
Riding around on a rat, huh? Your little friend has quite a personality. Hey, do you think you could help me with something? I have been stuck for a while,...
Bonnie, Bonnie, Bonnie.. Thanks so much..but still, how do you discribe the dark. I am glad you liked it. And Wisdom too. He is very nice, yes. And I...
describing the dark? Like what part? Darkness, something slithering in the dead of night? Darkness so black you could cut with a knife? Darkness surrounded the...
hey I'm at work, but I can email as long as no one approaches the desk, then I'd have to get them first before chatting again. Bonnie "Debrah A. Ballard...
The little gray skinned humonculos come out dragging a note book and quill then realizing it has forgotten it's ink bottle drop's it's supplies and runs off....
The little gray skinned humonculos come leaping out with scary amsk on face intending to scare Bonnie's silliness aaway whaa haa haa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 Bonnie...
Wisdom's losing patience that he has not yet met your master, you little rat-rider! He does not like being kept from his clan very long periods of time. chad...
fnklnfkdnfd chad sprague <lost4vr@...> wrote: The little gray skinned humonculos come leaping out with scary amsk on face intending to scare Bonnie's...
is anyone seeing this message on yahoo that say your session has expired? What the heck it that? I've never seen it before. Something about using Cookies ...
The little gray skinned humonculos comes scampering out and lookes around for the cookies since he is hungry he hopes there is chocolate chip or even punwheel...
The little gray skinned humonculos comes scampering out and lookes around for the cookies since he is hungry he hopes there is chocolate chip or even punwheel...
wisdom grabs the creature by the tail "Where is your master? chad sprague <lost4vr@...> wrote: The little gray skinned humonculos comes scampering out...
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