> No such thing as LOTR-Quenya grammar. Even if you take Tolkien's own noun
tables in the Plotz letter as the reference, you're still stuck with
plenty of forms which do not conform with expectations (because Tolkien
altered the grammar while thinking about a new problem) - just to give a
few examples, _Menelze_ instead of the expected _**Menelesse_ 'in heaven'
[...]
The adjective _menelessea_ in VT44:16 would suggest that #_menelesse_ is
indeed a possible locative of _menel_, though it can be shortened as
(_menelze_ >) _menelde_. I don't think anything has turned up (in late
material, that is) that definitely contradicts the Plotz letter, though
there are some forms that _supplement_ Plotz. (Another example: Plotz does
not indicate what the plural possessive ending is, but in Quendi and Eldar
we learn that it is _-iva_.)
Plotz never discusses how case endings are added to nouns ending in a
consonant, so it tells us nothing about how _menel_ would behave.
> the 'standard' Neo-Quenya grammar which is often used in Fanfic
compositions is just a construct, unknown to Tolkien.
I think I should use the word "compilation" rather than "construct" (which
implies the "construction" of something entirely new). Neo-Quenya attempts
to duplicate the grammar underlying the texts we have, above all the
samples occurring in the LotR itself, and also other sources to the extent
they don't contradict the LotR samples. If our grammatical deductions are
correct, the resulting "compiled" grammar does consist of ideas that
existed in Tolkien's mind at some point or another, though the "compiled"
system _as a whole_ very likely draws on different conceptual phases that
may not have coexisted originally (that is, as Tolkien saw the language).
Does this invalidate the "Tolkienian" nature of the compilation? Well,
opinions would probably differ. One could say that our compiled "complete"
grammar does not contradict Tolkien's ideas because there is no reason to
assume that he _ever_ had a crystal-clear vision of the entire grammatical
system (hence there is nothing to contradict). But some would no doubt say
that precisely since he hadn't, any attempt to put together such a
"complete" grammar cannot produce something that is truly Tolkienian.
Taking a balanced view is probably the best thing here. A Neo-Quenya
grammar is much like the published Silmarillion: a unified, _edited_
version based on Tolkien's many layers of ideas. No one will assert that
the Silmarillion that was published in the late seventies is exactly the
book JRRT himself would have published if he himself had lived to produce a
"final" version of it. Yet his name very properly appears on the title
page.
Similarly, if some of us venture to suggest what a normalized Neo-Quenya
grammar could look like, we do not thereby claim to know what Tolkien might
have produced if he had indeed written and published the Elvish grammar he
describes as "desirable" in one of his letters. A normalized Quenya grammar
necessarily cannot be "pure Tolkien", it will also reflect the preferences
of the editor, but nevertheless, it will be Tolkienian material that this
editor is editing.
Almost inevitably, the result tends to be a grammar more idealized and
streamlined that that which actually appears in the primary sources. For
instance, in my compositions I invariably let adjectives agree in number
with the noun they describe, and I might even expect others to do the same
-- though I am perfectly well aware that in quite a few cases, there is no
such agreement in Tolkien's own texts. How should a Neo-Quenya grammarian
deal with this fact? Did Tolkien's ideas differ at various times, did he
make some honest mistakes, or are we to conclude that it is simply
_optional_ whether adjectives agree in number or not? In such a case I
would go with the most "canonical" source, Namárie and its interlinear
translation in RGEO, where we find _linte yuldar_ for "swift draugths" and
Tolkien explicitly identified _linte_ as a "pl." adjective.
There are plenty of relatively minor issues that can be endlessly debated,
such as whether _carne_ or _cáre_ is the best option for the past tense of
_car-_ "do", or whether the word for "8" should be _tolto_ or _toldo_, but
I do feel that our Neo-Quenya compilations capture many of Tolkien's
general ideas about the language well enough. And certainly we have managed
to reproduce its general style, if indeed we can claim to have reproduced
anything when we "simply" put Tolkien's words together to form actual
texts.
>> the 'standard' Neo-Quenya grammar which is often used in Fanfic
> compositions is just a construct, unknown to Tolkien.
> I think I should use the word "compilation" rather than "construct"
> (which implies the "construction" of something entirely new).
I chose the term 'construct' rather deliberately (among other reasons,
because it has a somewhat provocative ring to it and may draw attention to
the underlying point). The problem which brought my reply (matching a list
of numbers from the Early Qenya grammar with material from 'Eldarin
Hands, Fingers and Numerals' ) and the Wiki-compilation http://en.wikibooks.org/wiki/Quenya
of Q(u)enya material which suggests without much ado that number schemes
from these vastly different sources can be matched readily is in my view
justification for the word.
I believe Helge is quite aware of the differences between a Neo-Quenya
grammar and Tolkien's actual writings, and for the most part I agree very
much with the presentation in his Quenya course. However, many other
people are not so aware (and frankly, I am tired of defending Tolkien's
own forms against overeager Neo-Quenya enthusiasts who (in good faith)
'correct' everything towards a standard grammar). The simple fact is that
there is a pronounced lack of awareness of how standardized some features
of the grammar are and on how few examples whole paradigms are based
(often 1). Needless to say, real language paradigms can not always
correctly be predicted from one example.
> Neo-Quenya attempts to duplicate the grammar underlying the texts we
> have, above all the
> samples occurring in the LotR itself, and also other sources to the
> extent they don't contradict the LotR samples.
Helge will probably agree that using numerals based on a partitive
_-inen_ does disagree with LotR samples. In that sense (and in quite a
few others, e.g. marking of unattested forms) the Wiki-book is
qaulitatively different from his own presentation (to which my comments
apply admittedly somewhat less).
> If our grammatical deductions are
> correct, the resulting "compiled" grammar does consist of ideas that
> existed in Tolkien's mind at some point or another, though the "compiled"
> system _as a whole_ very likely draws on different conceptual phases that
> may not have coexisted originally (that is, as Tolkien saw the language).
In my view, you can only 'compile' things into a whole which share the
same context. Suppose we are trying to design a showroom for a museum
which should resemble a living room in post-WW2 Germany. Clearly, having a
coal oven, a rocking chair and a grammophone next to the flatscreen TV,
the mobile phone and the DVD player would seem a bit odd - while all these
things did (or do) exist in German living rooms, as a rule they don't
coexist - they are 50 years apart (but so is the early Qenya grammar and
Tolkien's late writings). The resulting living room could be called a
construct - likewise, drawing from sources which at some point existed in
Tolkien's mind does not guarantee that the sum would not be artificial -
it is well known that even post-LOTR sources contradict each other
(sometimes even published samples). I think it is fair to call it a
'compilation' as long as no internal contradictions need to be smoothed
over - as soon as heavy editing is involved I'd rather go with 'construct'.
> Does this invalidate the "Tolkienian" nature of the compilation?
Does the fact that anachronisms are present invalidate the German nature
of the living room exhibit? Well, yes and no - it still retains some
degree of Germanness, but it is not a living room which is in any sense
typical. Germans would probably smile broadly if you present it to them as
if it would be the genuine thing. I imagine something similar for
Neo-Quenya...
> Almost inevitably, the result tends to be a grammar more idealized and
> streamlined that that which actually appears in the primary sources.
Yes, and frankly, I think something is lost along the way. Neo-Quenya
texts have some of the falvour of Tolkien's texts, but if given an
unpublished text by Tolkien and a Neo-Quenya text unknown to me, I think
it would be quite easy to tell them apart - Tolkien's text would reflect
the spirit of the language without clinging to details.
> How should a Neo-Quenya grammarian
> deal with this fact? Did Tolkien's ideas differ at various times, did he
> make some honest mistakes, or are we to conclude that it is simply
> _optional_ whether adjectives agree in number or not? In such a case I
> would go with the most "canonical" source.
I don't want to spoil anyones fun with Neo-Quenya texts (including my own
fun). But I think there is a difference between Tolkien's Quenya and
standardized Neo-Quenya and people should be aware of that. As long as
that is the case, there need not be an unque solution.
In the case at hand, a research project (grammar on the computer) was made
about Quenya. I think it is scientifically unsound unless it is very clear
whose Quenya is under investigation - mine, Helge's, Tolkien's early or
late. Grammar (or any linguistics) investigations into Elvish should be
primarily based on what Tolkien wrote about Elvish, not on what any one of
us made of it (and I shouldn't have to mention that). I think research
needs to be held to higher standards than enjoying the languages privately.
As for Neo-Quenya, I believe there can (potentially) be more to Neo-Quenya
compositions than following a previously agreed set of standard grammar
rules - I think that by studying the variations and experiments Tolkien
tried with the language, one can try to 'learn' about the underlying
essence, the taste which dicatates these shifts and deviations. If so, we
could 'allow' for similar experiments in Neo-Quenya if the outcome is then
more pleasant, if well done, that would in my view be closer to Tolkien's
Quenya than what we do now. But of course, this is hard to describe or
formalize, so I can't give any rules how to make such compositions (in
fact, I haven't actually tried although I am carrying this idea since Bill
Weldon posted similar ideas here).
> There are plenty of relatively minor issues that can be endlessly
> debated, such as whether _carne_ or _cáre_ is the best optionfor the
> past tense of_car-_ "do"
I don't know if people would consider it a minor issue if I speaked and
writed simplified standard English past tense - but for me the issue here
is to convey the message that Quenya is not 'simple' in the past tense
(and has a bunch of nasty exceptions) but that everything points to a rich
and complex structure of forms, and in my experience, that is not what
most people think.
So, I feel that calling Neo-Quenya a 'compilation' is going to make
readers lean back, relax and be fine with Ardalambion (or 'Quetin i lambe
eldaiva') Quenya whereas calling it a 'construct' might be able to bug a
few more folks enough to have a look into Tolkien's writings and see the
differences. So, I'll stay with the construct. I don't want people to feel
fine talking about Quenya grammar without knowing the original writings.
I must say I find this topic interesting, and I believe that I should point
out some things, when I feel that some of the things is a result of what I
wrote under annother topic.
My comments isn't cronological after what has been written before, and my
comments do not take a position on the issue whatever Neo-Quenya is a
construct or a compilation, just some things around it.
Since I felt myself a little hit by the comments in earlier posts in the topic
I want to point out, that I'm aware of that Tolkien put in a historical
parameter in his languages, in the way that the languages changed over the
time. Because of this it would be to difficult to manage to write a
grammar-file (A type of sourcefile to a specific gramatical language system.)
to all of it. This "problem" exists in all natural (spoken) languages, that
it changes over time, but you do not normally mention it. For example a book
that covers the english language, you do not mention this fact unless if the
book covers ancient english or over annother time epoch other than the
language of today.
Anyway, my intention was to write the grammar for the timeperiod of LOTR,
which I would have mentioned in the grammar library.
Yes I would actual liked to read/studied all his work, but I find it
difficullt. That's way I like quotations in references, so I can be able to
"get a taste of it of my own". Anyway for us (I can't really talk for all of
us, but I don't think I'm alone with this opinion) who hasn't read all the
texts that Tolkien wrote, really appreciate the work of several persons,
which both of you are included. Your works serves as gateways to Tolkiens
works, and I believe that they can work as a support when one feel oneself
ready to go to the next step and study more and deeper in the languages of
Tolkien.
As I have come to understand over time is that there is a variety "grammatical
rules" which Tolkien changed over time (real time) and tested. And some of
the coexists and there is not always "one truth".
So what do you call your own courses? (T.Renk and H.K.Fauskanger) Is it
Neo-Quenya or is it Tolkien-Quenya (For the LOTR period and maybe little
simplified). I must ask you for a definition of Neo-Quenya. I thought I had
one clear definition, but after reading in this topic, I realized that my
definition was probarbly not so good. After reading your mails, I wounder if
the definition is a standarized LOTR-Quenya. I thought that Neo-Quenya had
something to do with "filling the gap" of those questions Tolkien left to the
world after he had passed away and to be more a standarized Quenya.
If that's true, then if we go back to the making of a Quenya grammar library,
I can see a developement path of this project. As a first step I try to
implement the standardized grammatical rules from any of the courses.
Ofcause, the course that will be used have to be referenced. In the
sourcefiles, for each "grammatical rule", such as paradigms and so on should
have references to the work of Tolkien.
Before continuing it would be nice if people that have deeper knoledge than I
have, could test the different rules. For example check if case generation of
nouns are ok and so on according to that "degree" of quenya.
When the standardized lotr-quenya looks ok, next step would be to implement
alternatives. GF (the garammatical language system) is able to "catch"
alternative way of expression and idioms too, if one programmes it to do so.
But if people here think that it would be immense of work to implement Tolkien
lotr-quenya and there are to many quenstions to make a complete grammar, then
I have to take your word for it. In that case I have to be content with
Neo-Quenya instead. This is nothing I would prefere, but if Quenya is too
uncomplete, the it's not possible. In that case it would be possible to break
it down to different parts. E.g. to list diferent verbforms and be able to
list all or filter it for a specific time period, with and without "omited"
formes and inflections. Match words for finding references of simulare
inflection. Genereating morphological lexicons with possibles of limiting the
output e.g. to lotr-quenya without omited words.
Possibles are many, but the out come depend on the input.
Anyway it will proberly take some time before I'll get some time over to
begin, but I'm interested to see if there is some interest for it. I'm also
interested to see if there might be persons who have deeper knowledge than I
have, and who would like to test the results and correct me if my
interpretations and assumptions are wrong.
> Since I felt myself a little hit by the comments in earlier posts in the
> topic
> I want to point out, that I'm aware of that Tolkien put in a historical
> parameter in his languages, in the way that the languages changed over
> time. (...)
> Anyway, my intention was to write the grammar for the timeperiod of LOTR,
> which I would have mentioned in the grammar library.
I don't think that is the essential point (unless I misunderstand you) -
the difference between Elvish is that it develops in fictional (internal)
time from the awakening of the Elves to the 3rd age AND in real (external)
time from the beginnings in 1916 to the later writings of 1968+. So a
given time period in fictional time, say the 3rd age, still spans some
decades of real time development of the language. 3rd age Qenya as
conceived in the Etymologies is not the same as 3rd age Quenya as
conceived in 'Markirya'. It is this external development which is very
different from real language evolution which leads to internal
contradiction and editorial problems, not the fictional history of the
language.
Even if you say 'timeperiod of LOTR', Q(u)enya still remains variable in
external time and in that sense your timeframe is ill-defined.
> So what do you call your own courses? (T.Renk and H.K.Fauskanger) Is it
> Neo-Quenya or is it Tolkien-Quenya (For the LOTR period and maybe little
> simplified).
As I hopefully have made clear in disclaimers in the course and on my
webpage, what is in the course is my personal edition of Tolkien's Quenya.
"I make no claim that the ideas I present here necessarily reflect
Tolkien's ideas, although I certainly aim for this ideal." I don't think
'a little simplified' is quite appropriate: "Because, creating a speakable
Sindarin or Quenya is not only about filling in the gaps with clever
reconstructions - it involves at times heavy editorial decisions and
throwing out Tolkien-made material on the basis of personal preferences."
(all quotes from my page).
> I must ask you for a definition of Neo-Quenya. I thought I had
> one clear definition, but after reading in this topic, I realized that my
> definition was probarbly not so good. After reading your mails, I
> wounder if the definition is a standarized LOTR-Quenya. I thought that
> Neo-Quenya had something to do with "filling the gap" of those questions
> Tolkien left to the world after he had passed away and to be more a
> standarized Quenya.
Any merging of forms from different context, any invention and
reconstruction of forms, any guesswork to fill gaps, any dismissal of
Tolkien-made forms to homogenize the language could appropriately called
Neo-Quenya, Quenya then being Tolkien's language considered in its
appropriate context and with the knowledge that there is both internal and
external history to it (much of Neo- aims at removing the external history
to make the language speakable - real languages cannot deal with two
timelines). Well, that may be my definition :-)
Wednesday, May 10, 2006, 12:59:38 PM, Helge K. Fauskanger wrote:
HKF> Taking a balanced view is probably the best thing here. A Neo-Quenya
HKF> grammar is much like the published Silmarillion: a unified, _edited_
HKF> version based on Tolkien's many layers of ideas.
Comparing Neo-Quenya with Silmarillion is fundamentally wrong, because
Silmarillion was legitimised only by its completeness. Without this
goal being actually achievable, the editorial liberties Christopher
Tolkien had to take would not have been justified. Were he unable to
compile a _complete_ version of the legendarium, he would have no
right to apply the kind of unification you're talking about. Instead
of freely editing and recombining the material, he would have had to
present the material in its proper form, unchanged and supplied with
necessary commentaries and research.
And that is exactly what he did with the not-so-complete majority of
his father's papers, and what he intended to be the proper way of
presenting still unpublished texts! There is no possibility of
compiling a unified version of various pieces concerning Quenya
numerals, for example. So it is absolutely not justified for someone
to try to squeeze them into one standardised text.
Now, Tolkien's Quenya is in no way comparable to the legendarium by
its completeness. So far, there is no possibility of compiling the
various versions into one unified edition, as it was with
Silmarillion. So no justification there is for taking liberties with
Quenya as Christopher Tolkien did with the legendarium.
Namaarie! S.Y., Elenhil Laiquendo
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