This group is a place for me to share my original fiction with family and friends. If you've read my
fanfiction and enjoyed it, you're welcome! Just ask and I'll add you to the group. I hope to eventually submit some of my original fiction for publication, thus the need to keep this members only. I greatly value any comments, constructive criticism, thoughts, ideas or feedback you would like to share, but if you just want to read without responding, that's all right, too.
Update 6-8-09: My first two novels, The Fuller's Apprentice and its prequel The Tale of Gurion Thricebound, have been posted in their entirety and are available in the archives. Currently I am posting a stand alone fantasy set in a different universe, White Blood. It is complete at 20 chapters The first several chapters have been through a round of critiques and revisions, while the later chapters are still a bit rougher. I am posting one chapter a week, on Mondays. I would love to have your thoughts, especially on structure, pacing, characterization, and other high level type things, although technical details like word choice and typo alerts are also great. I'd love to know your immediate emotional reactions, speculations as to what might happen next, things you don't understand, things you feel are repetitive, and any plot holes you might spot.
Thanks for reading!