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poor poetry again

Message #5496 of 5523 |

Re: [druzia] poor poetry again

Hello Dmitry

Very neat!

One suggestion -- because build need as subject.

line 2 --when you build a home.

You're very brave. I wouldn't dare try to write poetry in Russian.

Daff

Hi,

To benefit from drinking
you can when build a home.
If you throw out bottles,
you use your liver wrong!

D.

Sun Oct 19, 2008 4:50 pm

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Hi, To benefit from drinking you can when build a home. If you throw out bottles, you use your liver wrong! D....	Dmitry Penzin penzin@...	Oct 18, 2008 9:10 pm
Hi Dmitri, You're right. It's not very good poetry, but it's terribly funny! :)))) Allen ... From: Dmitry Penzin To: druzia@yahoogroups.com Hi, To benefit...	Allen Lyons awlyons	Oct 19, 2008 3:21 am
Hello Dmitry Very neat! One suggestion -- because build need as subject. line 2 --when you build a home. You're very brave. I wouldn't dare try to write...	Daffni daf_2	Oct 19, 2008 4:50 pm
I hadn't seen the picture when I sent the reply. Wonderful picture and perfect for the verse. Daf...	Daffni daf_2	Oct 19, 2008 4:51 pm