Haan saket thik hi samjha tumane.....Aakrosh..hai maanta hun...Ab kya hai auir kiske liye...yah jawaab dena muskil sa hota hai...fir bhi de raha hu..."yaa fir...
Vij, Bahut sahi kaha aapne.............shuruaat to khud se hi karni padegi, fir hi humein haq banta hai kisi aur ko dosh dene ka...........Charity begins at...
Lavanya ji, Manoshi di aur Amrendra ji........ Aap logon ki ongoing ghazal ke rules ki discussion bahut avashyak hai mujh jaise sabhi logon ke liye jo abhi...
VIDAMBANA ... BUDDHO KI DUNIYA LACHARO KI DUNIYA; SHAKTIHIN, SWAYAN SE KARTE SANGHARSH BECHARO KI DUNIYA; ROG KAI ROG-GRAST KAI SUKH NAHIN BISTAR PAR PADE ...
Manoshi Di, bahut hi badhiya rachna hai .......prashansa sweekaar karein........ phir, woh aaya hai kai aasmanon ke paar bhej diya tha jise maine. Apne raaste...
likha achha hai ,vij.prayog bhi achha laga... lekin iske aashay se mujhe mushkil hui.khwab to her insan dekhta hai..neend me ya jaage hue...poori ho chahe...
Shyam Sir, AATA HAI EK AUR BACHCHA IS DUNIYA MEIN BUDDHA BANANE KE LIYE ! Sach hai lekin kya har koi itna khush/bad naseeb hota hai ki poori zindagi jee...
Manoshi di, Gustaakhi maaf.........lekin main abhi tak asmanjas mein hoon ki kya main galat hoon ya kisi ne gaur nahin kiya??? maine pahle bhi likha tha aapko...
Kavi aur chitrakar main bhed hai, Kavi apne swar main auir chitrakar apni rekha main jiwan ke tatva auir saundarya ka rang bharta hai." ... Do you Yahoo!? Y!...
Hello friends... Sapna dekha maine bhi or likh dala aap sabhi ke saamne... lag raha hai kuch lamba sa.. issliye aap sabhi ki pratikriya ka intzaar rahega isse...
Hello friends... Sapna dekha maine bhi or likh dala aap sabhi ke saamne... lag raha hai kuch lamba sa.. issliye aap sabhi ki pratikriya ka intzaar rahega isse...
Sach Jaya ?;-) to ye kitna Haseen Sapna ho jo tum apna ghar bhool ker , bhool se hi , mere ghar chali aao !! L jaya pathak <kamayani_1847@...> wrote: hi...
Yatharthvadi Kavita -- Samaj ka AAaina hotin hain -- Kavita use samne la ker khada ker detin hain -- Per Sath mein ye bhi kehneko man hai ki, Nar Ho Na Nirash...
Manoshi, do feel free to elobrate from a poet's view point --- Gazal ke bare mein bhi badhiya jaan kari aap aur Amrendraji dono ne likhin hain --- Good for...