Today is the first day of nanowrimo! In that spirit I bring you the first chapter of "Tom Swift and the Extrasolar Planet", the unofficial 34th volume in the...
Bravo! I really enjoyed your first installation, cannot wait for more. There are many ways to pursue fanfic, and I applaud your efforts. Thanks again, Vic As...
... Me too--LOUDLY! Jon, you've expertly caught the style and flow of TSJ; this really does read like The NEW Tom Swift Jr. Adventures #34 that OUGHT to have...
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... unofficial ... Pretty darn impressive. With the first four paragraphs you manage to jump right into the story, get the major introductions out of the way,...
Thanks, everyone, for your comments and critiques! They are very much appreciated. I'm glad that you are enjoying the story - I am having a lot of fun writing...
... of ... anyone ... the ... You may have absorbed that from my TSL alter-canon (Deimos gets the nod in UNDERLANDS OF MARS). I believe that in FLYING LAB,...
References to Space Friends and Mars: From Flying Lab: Just that day Tom had computed the ratio of the diameters of a smaller to a larger circle and concluded...
Thank you very much for that excellent bit of research! That definitely answers my questions. Outstanding! (And I have read a *lot* of your TSL work, Scott, so...
Space Weather News for Nov. 1, 2008 _http://spaceweatherhttp_ (http://spaceweather.com/) More than a year ago, in July 2007, International Space Station...
Here is the second chapter of "Tom Swift and the Extrasolar Planet", the unofficial 34th volume of the Tom Swift Jr. series: http://stories.cyragon.com/?p=298 ...
Jon, What an interesting take on the Space Friends!! That they have "lost the ability to leave [their] world." So it isn't a question of survival on the Earth,...
I'll restrain myself from saying "great" at each installment, as I know modest authors like you and Michael get tired of hearing it. (Though I don't, oddly.) ...
Chapter Seventeen: Phantom Defender. Near midnight upon the wide playa of the Black Rock Desert. The sky above was clear and splashed with stars, with a moon...
Wow! *Very* nice economy of words here. Two chapters and not only do we have a nifty new invention (the repela-suit), but we're already deep in a new plot...
... Of course we have to await Brother Cooper's denouement, but could it possibly be that the Space Friends are currently in a physiological state that makes...
... page on ... Very cool story! One minor mistake that I see. The sentence, "They're adjustable so that people of different heights and weights and wear the...
I've been reading Jon's installments and have been impressed. It seems we are having much to satisfy our desires for Tom Swift stories with three excellent...
You are absolutely right! Thanks for spotting that typo - I have fixed it! --Jon Cooper Greg Weir wrote: Very cool story! One minor mistake that I see. The...
Charlie, When I was reading the Tom Swift Jr books for the first time I was always eager to find out what was going on with the space friends. I kept hoping...
Now *that* would be fun! It reminds of a Stargate SG-1 episode, where a rip in space caused all sorts of alternate-reality SG-1 teams to come to Earth, leading...
Jon, Regarding your novel in progress, Tom Swift and the Extrasolar Planet, (Tom Swift Jr #34), I noticed that the title of the novel doesn't appear in the two...
on 11/2/08 8:06 PM, Jonathan Cooper at jcooper07@... wrote: Now *that* would be fun! It reminds of a Stargate SG-1 episode, where a rip in space caused...
... now ... Island ... Friend ... SF's ... planet ... picture. ... Jon ... is ... This is where I wish my memory (and records) were accurate. Was there not a...
This is the kind of chapter title I like. And the cliffhanger--such a grabber! What happens to us if our brains start interweaving Jon's and Michael's stories,...
... seems we are having much to satisfy our desires for Tom Swift stories with three excellent fan fiction projects underway. However, there may come a time...
Is time travel possible? Would you like to become a real life Chrononaut? Will we ever be able to transverse the fourth dimension as easily as we transverse...
I believe that there is a posting in another Yahoo group (#95), that attempted a FanFic based on having the Tom's meeting the other Toms It was titled: TOM...
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