I agree with Maria. It is a beautiful image. Also a resonant one. The experience of one home has come to a conclusion and you are moving on, yet here is the...
at your gravesite with head bowed I think of your talent for ripening peaches to perfection Jeanne [Non-text portions of this message have been removed]...
at your gravesite with head bowed I think of your talent for ripening peaches to perfection Jeanne half moon beach a gathering to scatter grandma's ashes dad...
c&c welcome a wish for a brush to paint transparence after the poem is penned a regret for the blank page that promised so much more sprite [Non-text portions...
I disagree. Transparence is not that abstract. How else do we describe a pane of glass? And although some descry abstractions in tanka, I think it is fine....
my sunstruck window takes on a glint of stained glass in amber and green as the westering sun pours out transparent colour norla antinoro [Non-text portions of...
exactly the meanings i was after with this one, with the choice of 'gibbous moon'. thank you, jeanne. sheila ... The ... on, yet here is ... reminder that ...
at your gravesite with head bowed I think of your talent for ripening peaches to perfection Jeanne half moon beach a gathering to scatter grandma's ashes dad...
at your gravesite with head bowed I think of your talent for ripening peaches to perfection Jeanne half moon beach a gathering to scatter grandma's ashes dad...
In a message dated 10/1/2004 3:57:25 PM Central Standard Time, sheila_windsor@... writes: at your gravesite with head bowed I think of your talent for...
out birding our cat loses his balance biting the dust - from where that knowing wink as I catch my reflection? Maria ***I like this. There might be too many...
Silent birds on overhead wires. Nothing moves. All the trees are still, all the birds are quiet. Regards, Trevor ... Hi Trevor, You have a good idea and the...
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Hi Maria and Kirsty et al. When I first saw your posts I wondered what was going on -- that wasn't the tanka I sent. Then I realized what had happened, I had ...
Silent birds in my crippled walking October rain Lewis Sanders...
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a wish for a brush to paint transparence after the poem is penned a regret for the blank page that promised so much more sprite thank you Jeanne and Norla for...
Ah yes, transparent colour. As a painter, I can tell you colour can be transparent - yes it can. :-) We use colour washes all the time - pigment mixed with...
road weary I pull off the highway oh, sleeping fields! give me your cover the moon for a pillow dash lights on . .. I rehearse what I'd say should we ever meet...
road weary I pull off the highway oh, sleeping fields! give me your cover the moon for a pillow *** Most successful L3! And I laud the prayerful tone. dash...
sometimes a whisper holds a breathless promise of moonlight on soft skin and the air holds perfume far headier than jasmine norla antinoro [Non-text portions...
