Thank you Jane for this series about your daughter. This is a wonderful way to wake up this morning--reading this--and it reminds me that we have so short a...
in the evening purple shamrock folds my thoughts on the craft origami the crane a favourite Nicely done. I enjoy the shades of evening and the relationship of...
oops again...obviously the tide cannot be mourning... how's this? as I mourn my loves of summers past a rising tide engulfs the rockbound weed hides all the...
I was eager to talk to Ashley, to see how she saw her mother in the beginning of the trip, so I began calling as soon as I thought they would be up. No answer....
Decided to revise this one as follows: almost over this evening with friends by the canal where the river's flow quietly lingers -- Jane Wilson Yes. Yes. This...
It is such a good thought that Shaun is with Heidi as they head out to the first place where neither one has ever gone before. Only BJ is old enough, at 35,...
Ray called and gave me more exact locations so I can now follow Heidi's path on the map. Most of the places marked on her itinerary are not on even our biggest...
Kirsty, What do you think about moving the word "engulfs" to line 3? And perhpas adding a break or colon at the end of the first line. mourning: I know not...
Suzanne, I love the images in this connecting the human world (sleeping couple) with the natural world (crying insects). What do you think about this...
July 3, 2002 RaysWeb/WHC Haiku Spring Kukai Results http://raysweb.net/haiku-spring/ Congratulations to the winners of the RaysWeb/WHC Haiku-Spring Kukai! 3...
the parking lot on a steamy night in early July -- a young couple's heated words in Spanish -- Jane Wilson ... Do You Yahoo!? New! SBC Yahoo! Dial - 1st Month...
sleeping late drinking coffee at night writing poems -- so many ways to celebrate Independence Day -- Jane Wilson -- There is not ONE truth, but many. ... Do...
Very clever the way you have added an ambiguity that I had not seen. Nifty. In fact there are subtle changes in meaning throughout. Lots of new ideas. Let me...
I know that today the whole family is meeting Heidi and Shaun at Clover Meadow. Though Ray invited us to join them, there was not the urgency to be there that...
... I like it much better this way; I never could get it to come out right before. I'm reminded of art class, when I'd work on a drawing and either I'd think...
driving home through the city at night drops of sweat trickle down my back veering this way and that -- Jane Wilson The heatwave continues here in Virginia --...
driving home through the city at night drops of sweat trickle down my back veering this way and that -- Jane Wilson sweltering heat and heavy leaves hang...
as I enter the home of a married woman, the way she squeezes my hand as she greets me at the door John Wisdom Remembering that I am a traditionalist, and like...
Hi Alison, What do you think about using a more specific verb in L4, such as "flowed"? Also, perhaps "within" at the end of L4 instead of "in" at the beginning...
