mother said four-leaf clover was a plain lie soon, i whispered you won't need wheelchair [Non-text portions of this message have been removed]...
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Spiros Zafiris
spiroszafiris
Oct 8, 2012 9:47 am
..more clearly throw me a rope to corral the clouds-- leave only blue and nestling peaks--that I may witness her countenance more clearly ~~ ..(C)2012...
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Spiros Zafiris
spiroszafiris
Oct 24, 2012 6:19 am
..They respond leave the moons and the farthest star simply gaze simply gaze, now and then They'll respond like she used to ~~ ..(C)2012 Spiros Zafiris ...
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samuraiwarrior1998
samuraiwarri...
Oct 26, 2012 3:22 pm
opposite the cemetery laughter echoes over headstones children's peek-a-boo (C)2012, --= Samurai =-- I have been away for quite some time. Life's problems and...
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Spiros Zafiris
spiroszafiris
Nov 6, 2012 11:20 am
..well advised Poetry has protected me when I winced back and flexed my insanity; from cauldrons I turned, and offered tanka ~~ ..circa 2011..(C)2012...
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Spiros Zafiris
spiroszafiris
Nov 30, 2012 8:02 am
... ..ahem if not for this barren log frivolity would reign on this delicious beach it lends a sense of ahem ~~ ..(C)2012 Spiros Zafiris ..channeled; spirit...
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Spiros Zafiris
spiroszafiris
Dec 9, 2012 9:06 am
..#82691 the foam of gurgling eddies I expunge only her arms and mine, embraced forever, remains ~~ ..(C)2012 Spiros Zafiris ..channeled; spirit Harmony;...
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Spiros Zafiris
spiroszafiris
Dec 16, 2012 8:06 am
after midnight tunes these after midnights sing ice cream and burning myrrh tunes lavender wants in and I let it ~~ ..Dec. 16, 2012..(C)2012Spiros...
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Spiros Zafiris
spiroszafiris
Dec 28, 2012 8:09 am
clumps of snow once more, with my dustpan, I threw down the balcony snow each time a clump grazed my tree's dry branches, I apologized ~~ ..Dec. 28,...
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Spiros Zafiris
spiroszafiris
Jan 12, 2013 9:35 am
..leafless leafless now they face us and we know they're cold there are no coats for them but some of us will not rebloom ~~ ..Sat., Jan. 12, 2013..(C)2013...
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Spiros Zafiris
spiroszafiris
Jan 12, 2013 9:58 am
..changed one word in L5..but feel it is important.. ..leafless leafless now they face us and we know they're cold there are no coats for them but more...
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Jane Reichhold
janereichhold
Jan 12, 2013 6:34 pm
Thanks for the good poem, Spiros. I agree with your change. Still I am debating the philosophy in L5. Is that what I think, too? Or not. See, you got me...
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Spiros Zafiris
spiroszafiris
Jan 12, 2013 6:59 pm
..thanks for the feedback, Jane..you know, i changed, slightly, L5, a bit more--(a 3rd time)..but didn''t think it would be wise to keep sending small changes ...
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Kitsune Miko
PoeticOne_1
Jan 14, 2013 4:16 am
http://s28.beta.photobucket.com/user/tankavisions/media/another-dead-flower2_zps464e9ae1.jpg.html?sort=3&o=0 Sandy Vrooman -- "Expectations are resentments...
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Wahyu W. Basjir
wahyu_basjir
Jan 14, 2013 5:50 am
1/ the main ingredient of all good dishes is love she recalls once in a while her daughterıs face 2/ washing out the grayness of you i hold dear down in the...
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Spiros Zafiris
spiroszafiris
Jan 14, 2013 8:41 am
..her walk she walks on blossoms--lighter feet are only far high yet, even from there, petals and bulbs wish it was they ~~ ..Mon., Jan., 14, 2013..(C)2013...
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Spiros Zafiris
spiroszafiris
Jan 14, 2013 2:26 pm
..it apears i've made one of my infrequent grammatical errors..in L5 i used "was" when i should have used "were", 'twas pointed out to me.. ..her walk ...
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Spiros Zafiris
spiroszafiris
Jan 19, 2013 11:45 am
tell me counsel me, table and chair why must I fill these pages tell me, at least, one moon cheers ~~ ..Sat. Jan. 19, 2013..(C)2013 Spiros Zafiris ..channeled;...
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Shanna
seestawoman
Jan 23, 2013 12:05 am
this crystal cave rainbows on my paper Myrlins magik colors the pome shanna http://hawaiian-poet-tree.blogspot.com/ [Non-text portions of this message have...
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Spiros Zafiris
spiroszafiris
Jan 29, 2013 9:50 am
..private time swallows, do not sit on my raised palms when I entreat the skies on behalf of loved ones--I respect your private time ~~ ..Tuesday, Jan. 29,...
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Jane Reichhold
janereichhold
Jan 29, 2013 5:11 pm
Spiros, I was wondering why you did not form this into this shape: swallows, do not sit on my raised palms when I entreat the skies on behalf of loved ones I...
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Jane Reichhold
janereichhold
Jan 29, 2013 5:32 pm
oops. I see Yahoo put in a line space. . . swallows, do not sit on my raised palms when I entreat the skies on behalf of loved ones I respect your private...
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Spiros Zafiris
spiroszafiris
Jan 29, 2013 6:21 pm
..thanks Jane..>>i'm very pleased you like this one..i like how you arranged poem..Harmony knows i prefer s/l/s/l/l..so She was only trying to comply..but i...
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Spiros Zafiris
spiroszafiris
Jan 29, 2013 6:28 pm
...oh, Jane..>>Yahoo put in the line break..well, i wasn't going to line-break it..but i like your arrangement..again, thanks much..>>spiros ... From: Spiros...
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Shanna
seestawoman
Jan 29, 2013 10:05 pm
I always have so much trouble understanding your pomes but the way Jane put it fits perfectly and makes sense... I like it... shanna e ..thanks Jane..>>i'm...
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Spiros Zafiris
spiroszafiris
Jan 29, 2013 11:58 pm
..thanks Shanna..>>nice of you to comment.>>spiros ~~ ... From: Shanna <shanna@...> Subject: Re: [Tanka] Jane's Yahoogroups Forum..private time ...
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Shanna
seestawoman
Jan 30, 2013 4:41 pm
sunday supper letting the music flow filling... no notes to follow they just fall that way shanna http://hawaiian-poet-tree.blogspot.com/ [Non-text portions of...
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Jane Reichhold
janereichhold
Jan 30, 2013 6:18 pm
Shana, I have the feeling I am missing some important information I need to completely comprehend this one. Why Sunday? Why supper? What do the last two lines...
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Shanna
seestawoman
Jan 30, 2013 6:27 pm
well every sunday we dress up and have pot luck suppers and play music and when we realy start to jam its like we are getting filled up on the sounds that we...
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Jane Reichhold
janereichhold
Jan 30, 2013 9:11 pm
Shanna, thanks for taking the time to answer my questions. After hearing of the complete event I am wondering if this tanka is a part of a sequence? I still ...
