M Kei or anyone who can identify this, please don't be shy. M Kei wrote a tanka
that I stumbled upon in cyberspace. Here is a paraphrased version:
i'm drawn to you
because your darness
is unlike
my own
If anyone or M Kei can post the exact wording, I would greatly appreciate it.
Thank you.
Tye
thank you Paul Im glad you liked it now that it has come back to me I shall
keep it..the others I sent Ill never see again lol...
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>> lightning
>> smell of ozone..
>> the southern sky turns blue
>> streaking hairline fractures
>> purge the heavens..
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>> glitter of
>> comet dust
>> rains down
>> and lights
>> the night
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>> shanna
>> http://hawaiian-poet-tree.blogspot.com/
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>> http://www.photoshow.com/watch/RQ9Ec3Kj
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> Hi Shanna,
> I find the second poem here simple and breath taking.
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> Paul
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--- In Tanka@yahoogroups.com, "shanna" <shanna@...> wrote:
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> lightning
> smell of ozone..
> the southern sky turns blue
> streaking hairline fractures
> purge the heavens..
>
> glitter of
> comet dust
> rains down
> and lights
> the night
>
> shanna
> http://hawaiian-poet-tree.blogspot.com/
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> http://www.photoshow.com/watch/RQ9Ec3Kj
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Hi Shanna,
I find the second poem here simple and breath taking.
Paul
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--- In Tanka@yahoogroups.com, "H. Gene Murtha" <gmu9240555@...> wrote:
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> broken
> she came to me
> crippled
> like a sapling
> slumped over
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> Gene
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Beautiful Gene,
What's left unsaid speaks volumes.
an old one of mine
a delicate flower
battered and bruised
by the wind -
these past few months
that's how I've seen you
(MET V3 N4)
I felt they worked together somehow!
Best wishes
Paul (Smith)