this young boy tossing pebbles into clouds, and you, telling me i'm too old to dream she sings to me in the breath of a dream . . . canyon walls painted with...
your running to the court’s other end a buzzer rings how quickly joy can pass one by ___ custom has it i check the clock could be when the game is over i...
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erika-haven931@...
Feb 1, 2007 8:59 pm
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just below the surface of your skin I see the face of your youth ... with hope she stares into her mother's face that uncharted territory between cruel reality...
in the corner booth she is still hungry soon their eyes feast on each other smiling into one another a little joke nothing to do about it he will look away ...
lyrical verse echo in the leaves at day's end the curves your lower lip in rapture full of silence the fluted glass full of light still a need to sing crickets...
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leap with me into a bowl of stars, thickened with leftover dreams morning mist . . . in the belly of a duck, young men thinking they're invincible you said...
bravo.....a bowl of stars shanna leap with me into a bowl of stars, thickened with leftover dreams morning mist . . . in the belly of a duck, young men ...
what will you do when the ground beneath you coughs up blood in a dry grass whisper? i sleep in an empty bed like I do on nights when summer sweeps the walkway...
You have not heard much from me lately, but I have been writing poetry. A lot of them wove themselves into the following lengthy sequence. I hope you find...
M. Kei
kujaku@...
Feb 9, 2007 2:34 am
19560
Tthe best tanka I have read of yours to date, Kei. Your voice is evolving. robert wilson...
mount lassen puts on cloud hats & veils impeccable she knows weather and how to wear the snow ___ fire underground basalt lava flows a fulfillment the ground i...
impressive poetry here, Kei. authentic. there are several that I really like. among my favorites is this one: a curmudgeon, I suppose, this man who sits ...
Sandy ~ thanks for completing the round ~ louis kitsune miko <kitsunemiko@...> wrote: nice work Sandy ... [Non-text portions of this message have been...
~K~ i too have been challenged with life stuff, and not posting nor responding much but continue to wrote daily. there is a discernible difference in your...
Robert, Janet, Louis, Thank you for your kind words. I actually write quite a lot of poetry like this, but I think its effect is diluted when only one or two...
I really like the usage of "unbuilt", Louis. Your ingenuity is probably my favorite part of your work. Warmly as ever, Michael ... From: Louis Osofsky To:...
Wonderful series. Thanks for sharing, I really enjoyed it. Here are some of my favorites: first cardinal of the year, on any day but this, your red would be ...
Michael, Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I'm glad you found something to like in the poems. I generally don't explain my poems because I...
M. Kei
kujaku@...
Feb 10, 2007 5:18 pm
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Michael ~ thanks with gratitude and wonder ~ louis Michael Paone <mpaone12@...> wrote: I really like the usage of "unbuilt", Louis. Your ingenuity is...