Hi, an'ya. I wrote this last year and now that you mention it, I'm not sure why the capitalization. As a revision, I removed all caps: sound of endings drying...
Hi, an'ya. I wrote this last year and now that you mention it, I'm not sure why the capitalization. As a revision, I removed all caps: sound of endings drying...
... i'm sorry to come in with a note of dissent but in what sense can a 'fallen apple' or an unfallen one for that matter, be 'saved'? saved from what?...
... I read it as saving them from falling down, Sheila! By collecting them before they fall... As simple as that... You know - out of compassion for the apples...
JJ, Thanks for sharing your thoughtful tanka. I think we are all appreciating just the fact of having just the necessary things, food. water and shelter. It...
... Andrew - I could really like this tanka except for the confusion I feel about your last two lines. Are you saying your father has shrunk so much that both...
... already ... rotting? i ... that ... whichever ... them ... compassion for ... I don't ... hi yuri thanks for attempting to clarify. your 'premonition'...
... i have trouble with the last two lines too. i read the 'vastness' between 'wheelchair' and 'recliner' as a bitter, sardonic comment: 'how my father's...
... i have found it a good practise to 'change hats' with my poetry before sharing it: to imagine that i am a reader coming to the poem from outside. in other...
... poem, ... **TOTALLY agree, Kirsty > my only excuse is that i´m not TALKING English on a daily basis, so, i´m not used to this language "flow", if u catch...
Broken cities, buildings, roadways, people. Which question fits: where is God? where is humanity? Rick [Non-text portions of this message have been removed]...
... poem, ... **TOTALLY agree, Kirsty > my only excuse is that i´m not TALKING English on a daily basis, so, i´m not used to this language "flow", if u catch...
a tight tee and jeweled midriff pregnancy the care my mother took concealing it Kirsty c/c always welcome [Non-text portions of this message have been...
... Michael- It's funny, but I've already revised the last two lines, realizing that they weren't saying what I wanted them to say. So now: a tattoo of the...
... Can only say that humour is not equally understood or evaluated by everyone - but between a smiling and a wry face I'd like to see the former even if...
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