Tanka is Japan's oldest poetry form. Traditionally a tanka has five lines with 5-7-5-7-7 syllables. In English some count syllables and some just have short-long-short-long-long lines. If you know haiku, you know half of a tanka. Unlike haiku, tanka encourage feelings and emotions. Here is the place to try out a new poetry form. Give and get feedback on your poems.
more on old age ... 1) rosy dreams fast fading, melting in black & white the last autumn leaf flings to the bough 2) i am the night traveler weary & cold
Thanks Ella! The proper preposition should be "for" in lieu of "of". I am thinking "chilvalry" is akin to youth and "captivity" to old age! Tony pallid