Well, everyone, we are growing like a weed, and, yet, hardly anything is ever said on here. Welcome to the last couple of new people; please write and let us...
tori
tori@...
Mar 3, 2000 3:48 am
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Hi, guys. I sent this to another list recently, so some people here may have already seen it. This piece is about 1900 words long, and I would love some...
Deb Courtney-Bertha
sfmqyj@...
Mar 3, 2000 9:13 pm
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Hi Deb -- I didn't get around to this on the other list, so I'm happy to have the opportunity to crit it, here. Critting as I read (2nd time thru'), and you...
Robyn Herrington
rmherrin@...
Mar 6, 2000 3:44 pm
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Robyn... Thank you for taking the time to critique this piece. I get so close to my own work that I can't see it clearly, and for whatever reason, this piece...
Deb Courtney-Bertha
sfmqyj@...
Mar 7, 2000 2:38 pm
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Deb, I've started a crit, but with so many papers to grade, I've not finished yet... (Many of my points Robyn got to first! <G>) ... -- Join us for short...
tori
tori@...
Mar 7, 2000 5:03 pm
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I've promised myself to get to this revising business quickly on this one...however, in my life, a committment to doing something quickly realistically means I...
Deb Courtney-Bertha
sfmqyj@...
Mar 7, 2000 5:17 pm
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Hey Deb -- ... It's a good piece. Don't give up on it! Like you, I can never see my own work for what it is -- the words and the process of putting them...
Robyn Herrington
rmherrin@...
Mar 8, 2000 4:00 pm
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Thank you, Tori: My name is Jean E. Rigod (Jeannie) and I'm a 48 yr old wife, mother, and adopted labby mommie. I have two poems being published in Fall 2000,...
crafts00
crafts00@...
Apr 9, 2000 8:45 pm
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... Try, try and try again :) I will try and review some of your work once I find time to do anything but study... T ===== ...
T Draak
tlejeune78@...
Apr 10, 2000 3:27 pm
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The main character in this piece is an Hispanic named Jesus (Hay-Zoos) not to be confused with the Christ. So if anyone might be offended by this scifi techno...
kab2K@...
May 12, 2000 9:46 pm
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I will have a resource for you shortly, if so. Karal...
kab2K@...
May 12, 2000 9:47 pm
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... I like to write sci fi mostly, but I like to mingle the past in it when it works well...so, yes, that would be fine. Fanoula has needed a historical...
tori
tori@...
May 12, 2000 9:50 pm
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... First, gut reaction. Cool story! <G> Tori, going to read it again and waiting on others' reactions...*hint, hint!* -- Join us for short stories to read...
tori
tori@...
May 12, 2000 9:57 pm
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Okay, Karal -- short caveat -- I critique as I read, so I might ask questions that you end up answering later. Robyn ... Ah. On second reading, I got that...
Robyn Herrington
rmherrin@...
May 12, 2000 10:05 pm
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In a message dated 5/12/00 9:58:10 PM !!!First Boot!!!, tori@... writes: << First, gut reaction. Cool story! <G> ... THanks very much Tori :)...
kab2K@...
May 12, 2000 10:25 pm
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Robyn, simply the best critique ever -- thank you! (Not to dissuade anyone else who has anything to add -- can't get too many suggestions.) Thanks Tori for...
kab2K@...
May 12, 2000 10:31 pm
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... You're welcome....all I did was start it...we *all* need to keep it going! <G> *hint hint!* Tori -- Join us for short stories to read and share at ...
tori
tori@...
May 13, 2000 2:41 am
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Some of you may know of Doug's and my newest loves--mini donkeys. We went to see them today at a farm not far from where we are building our house. We've ...
tori
tori@...
May 13, 2000 2:52 am
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Karal, I like this...there's an interesting beginning here. A fw brief remarks here, then see comments in text below. First, the name Jesus Poppet is not...
Deb Courtney-Bertha
sfmqyj@...
May 13, 2000 2:01 pm
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Love this news, Tori -- from one horse lover to another! I also love the Shetlands. Karal...
kab2K@...
May 13, 2000 2:55 pm
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Deb, Thank you so much. Wow you guys are terrific! Very good points. I'm printing them all out and will see where I can make these improvements in the ...
kab2K@...
May 13, 2000 3:00 pm
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... it sits in a folder waiting for completion. I'll get to it one of these days! fanoula...
Fanoula
thealu@...
May 13, 2000 6:29 pm
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I just discovered this site and it has over 500 photos of the west in case any of you need photos to accompany articles or if you just need visual cues to...
kab2K@...
May 14, 2000 10:30 pm
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Hardly ever write this kinda thing...am double-subbing (two lists), so apologies for anyone who sees it twice (since I know there's some overlap between the...
Deb Courtney-Bertha
sfmqyj@...
May 30, 2000 10:11 pm
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Deb, this is incredibly eerie -- I wrote a story a few years back that is so similar to yours in several regards. And stranger still, I had thought to post it...
kab2K@...
May 31, 2000 3:57 am
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Hi Karal. Thanks for the comments. Here's what I am trying to do (which is entrely different, perhaps, from what I _have_ done -- it being difficult to make...
Deb Courtney-Bertha
sfmqyj@...
May 31, 2000 12:53 pm
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Actually I do have a couple of ideas... It would help me as a reader to know something about marcy before her deconstruction. It could just be a line of...
kab2K@...
May 31, 2000 3:25 pm
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Thanks for the ideas on this, Karal. what I think I will do (though not for a few weeks, until the idea gels a bit more), is start in the bathroom, and have...
Deb Courtney-Bertha
sfmqyj@...
May 31, 2000 11:37 pm
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I thought up these first two lines this morning and will use them again, but this is what came out first...<G> Tori The Death of a Morning The morning opened...
tori
tori@...
Jun 2, 2000 1:53 pm
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If someone is writing an autobiography so they need permission to use the real names of people they know? Al Current Read: Fay by Larry Brown Just Finished:...
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