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Silent, Soft and Slow poem by Mary Carlisle for comment   Message List  
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Re: [PoetryWorks] Silent, Soft and Slow poem by Mary Carlisle for comment

I love this and the revisions you have made.  One suggestion:  2nd stanza, last
line I think should read "glint", singular...referring to the "Ice slicks" which
I read as a noun.  Nice winter imagery...not that I'm familiar with winter here
on the Gulf Coast.

Kay Cox
Tue May 5, 2009 3:10 am

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Silent, Soft and Slow Frost like lace on frozen panes glitters from each tattered weed. Smoke spirals past the ice-glazed eaves snowflakes spill like falling... 		Mary Margaret Carlisle
solathome
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9:04 pm

Your poem made me want to see snow again. It is beautiful. June Lavernway...
J LAVERNWAY
jlavernway
Offline Send Email 		May 5, 2009
1:44 am

Hi Mary: Loved the poem. Great imagery, especially the lines "shoes the feet of barren trees" and "glints like silver buttons on new coats." The poem made...
Barbara A Carle
carlebarbara
Offline Send Email 		May 6, 2009
10:13 pm

I love this and the revisions you have made.  One suggestion:  2nd stanza, last line I think should read "glint", singular...referring to the "Ice slicks"...
Kay Cox
gypsycrone2000
Offline Send Email 		May 6, 2009
10:23 pm

I like the title, however it doesn't seem to work for this poem. First stanza: Frozen panes, tattered weeds and ice glazed eaves do not convey a feeling of...
Oscar
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Offline Send Email 		May 11, 2009
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