... Heh, I like that. I've been wanting to work on my Joshua story lately but have been getting pretty busy. Actually I guess what we need is another big...
... since ... still ... see ... it ... he's ... badly ... Ugh. Well, the badly-dubbed anime is the stuff that'll be almost guaranteed to drive the person...
Greetings to all. Some of you may remember me from a few years back. I dropped out due to difficulties keeping up with the group, but recently decided to...
Background: Here's a story I've been working on that I wanted to share with the group. Comments would be welcome. The setting is the interactive history world...
Falshas Fethoran, Dun Ri of Wyrtal and Thar Ri of Hadrair was poring over the plans for a new river dredger when he was interrupted by his first minister....
... To Lord Boris van Adin Consul of the Green Republic of Kaeir We return your greetings. Know that we trust in our friendship with our kindred in Taltheran...
... Hi, Jefferson! Welcome back! I just wanted to make sure you know we aren't ignoring you. I've been pretty tied up lately, but I'll read your stories...
... Yeah, I started reading the first one you posted, and have been enjoying it, but holy cow it's big and I had to stop. Just a note that it would be better...
... Sorry about that. It was already in progress when I decided to join the group so I decided to post it all at once. Other stories and future installments...
... [snip] ... You definitely show a grasp of the details of this world, and I really like the nature of the test, although I'm not 100% clear on what ...
... Good point. High Sorcery is a particular magical style practiced by the sorcerers of Mir. Mira's (Exquaestio's) magical style is newly formed on a ...
... Well, it really depends upon how much of the world you feel as though you need to show. I've seen many short stories in which the authors simply introduce...
Salt and beef had created the town of Corryn. The Morvali nomads lived in the tallgrass prairies stretching out to the west. From time immemorable they visited...
... I think that some kind of primer within or as the introduction would help; you can introduce unknown elements in a story, but it really helps if they're...
As nomads, the men and women of the Morvali traveled together, and the Morvali women with the caravan had quickly adopted the only woman in Wyrtal's embassy....
... To His Majesty the Dun Ri Falshas, Greetings and Salutations from the Green Republic, and the Blessings of the Lady of the Isles. It is with regret that...
The dingy club's stage was becoming soaked with the rain that was falling outside, a steady heavy thundery downpour, the kind that you kept thinking it had to...
Heuristics Inc. wrote: [snip] ... What a cool little story! With the art, the gritty urban setting, and the sense of wonder, it reminds me of something Charles...
... They consider anything they found without looking at fanfiction.net the worst writing in the language? They didn't even start in on the worst. :D ...
... Hey, thanks! I think some bits of the prose are a bit clunky and could use some editing, but it felt good to write again! Also tells me I should read de...
... Dreams Underfoot, his first collection of short stories set in the wonderful fictional city of Newford -- a place with fairies in the garbage dumps,...
... Well, I think then you're getting into self-awareness. Can someone *trying* to be bad, writing an entry for a bad writing contest, ever really reach the...
for full length novels, I enjoyed Memory and Dream quite a bit. Svaha is one of the best futuristic, gritty Sci-fi stories I've read. However, Delint's short...
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