I'm so sorry about your grandfather. It takes time to heal, and I'm sure you'll learn to cope again, even though you'll still miss him. Good for you for...
Ooooohhhh!!!! Who was this demon? It seems Nicholas knew him. He had won? Was there a bet or a competition of some kind? This was wonderfully creepy! ... ...
Oh, wow, Jennifer. That's so hard. But I do know what you mean. I lost two uncles and a friend around the same time. Death is so hard to deal with. And I do...
... Very good start of a story. One thing that caught me, though, were the language ("ossifying" and "invectives"). Don't get me wrong, they are perfectly...
... I love the world you've made here. I also like the fact that Crystal wasn't held with some kind of reverence or fear in the story because she was the ...
Wow. Well done. Very nice description, but not too much description. Interesting take on the topic, and the ending was fabulous. About the only crit I have...
... I just love this opening paragraph. It's descriptive and technically-oriented, but you make it easily accessible to a reader. One thing that drew my...
Did this one in exactly 10 minutes. Had something different in mind for the end, actually, but I was running out of time. Anyway, enjoy:)! June decided no...
Took me 15 minutes to do this one. It's the same Nicholas and Tamel I've been writing about. Enjoy! :) Tamel could hear Nicholas' sobs long before she saw...
Here's the second part. :-D I plan to continue it, hopefully. Have fun and enjoy. God bless you! Jessica Crystal struggled for quite some time before she...
... Thank you, Jennifer, for your comments. :-) I'm glad you liked it, overall, and I'm really happy about the 'macabre lightheartedness' -- it was just what...
Hi all. :) I hope you all had a wonderful 4th of July weekend. We found an excellent spot to catch the fireworks. I'm glad it didn't get rained out like...
LOL! I get the feeling Aunt Polly set up that remote just for that purpose. After all, a smart woman HIDES the things she doesn't want the kids to play with....
Thanks, Jennifer. Actually, the ending I had in mind was really depressing, so I'm not sure if I should write it and make myself all sad and angry, or if I...
Oh, I like the fact that he hates his job. So many times, "death bringers" really love their jobs, and I'm so glad that Nicholas doesn't. Thank you for that....
Save her from unknown peril? So, it was just a test, and there was no peril, and the poor girl was just going for a walk in the woods, and was abducted by...
OK, ten minutes, right? Jason knew there was a catch, but he bought the house, anyway. How could he resist? The colonial style mansion, built on a prime...
... Now, see, that is why I should never read Michelle's entries before sending in my own. Mine is very simple, and I had it before I started reading hers,...
Aaaarggghhhh!!!! I have been singing this song to myself, now, for the last 4 hours! Well, maybe only 2 1/2 but it seems like longer. I need help. ... From:...
Yeah, she has about 15 kids, natural, adopted, and/or foster. She gets to hear it a lot. ... From: Tammy Rizzo [mailto:ms-tamany@...] Sent: Tuesday, July...
... Well, to be fair, I've been doing the same thing. Insidious little ditty, isn't it? I wonder if 'Uncle Walt' ever really realized how awfully bubblegum...
Not any more. I put on a CD to drive it out of my mind. Shhhh! ... From: Tammy Rizzo [mailto:ms-tamany@...] Sent: Tuesday, July 06, 2004 2:33 PM To:...
Oh, no. It wasn't Small World. It was the song from my story. I really can't remember the words after "good old-fashioned harmony." Does anyone else know...
<sighs in a content way> I really liked this. There's something about a jazzman and a saxophone, something about an artist who starves without being able to...
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