Awakening My dream woke up, and I slowly dissipated -- a lingering memory that watched as my dream got up from my bed. He was me, only handsome, smooth. Even...
... Good hook! Pulled me right in. :) ... Says something about this guy's wardrobe. ;-) I like that little detail. ... This guy doesn't have a lot of good...
Great concept! I found the paragraph where he accomplishes everything at the office especially strong. My only issue was the very end. Took me a bit to clue...
Oh, Michelle--this is priceless. I have a whole list of men I want Galetea to visit! Krys "Writing is no trouble: you just jot down ideas as they occur to you....
Cute, Jennifer. Appearances can be so deceiving. Krys "Writing is no trouble: you just jot down ideas as they occur to you. The jotting is simplicity...
Thanks, Krys. So do I. I heard on the radio today the DJ was complaining about his latest date. She was beautiful, smart, talented, sexy, etc. But she had...
Have you ever had one of those dreams where you know it's a dream, and you're able to steer it along? I live there. I never should have agreed to the...
Hi Michelle, I liked it. Shows a lot of imagination with the different dream scenes you came up with. Flirts with the fleeting nature of dreams and the...
Oh, boy! I look forward to seeing that. Thanks for the feedback. ... From: Justin [mailto:uther_pendragen@...] Sent: Monday, June 07, 2004 11:24 PM To:...
In a message dated 6/7/2004 9:16:20 AM Eastern Standard Time, clj1_writes@... writes: Write about a compromise I'm compromising all the time. Planning a...
MerryMeetYall@... wrote: <snip of very sad memories> ... Oh, Beck! Hugs and snuggles and cyberchocolate (or the cyber-stimulant of your choice) sent your...
OK, this took a bit longer than 10 minutes, but I had to reach the end. Strictly speaking, she was a broadsword, but for some reason, most people mistook her...
Very well written! I'm not in a critiquing mood right now, so I doubt that I'll be any help. However, I love your play on the saying and the surprise ending....
Thank you! This was more of an exercise to get the juices flowing that something I want to USE, so I don't mind a lack of critiques. I just wrote it for fun....
I'm glad. I live to entertain. ... From: Tammy Rizzo [mailto:ms-tamany@...] Sent: Monday, June 14, 2004 12:26 PM To: Fantasybits@yahoogroups.com Subject:...
It was a dark and stormy night when Steven Prince got that fateful letter. He had mailed out his manuscript to 100 different publishers, and 99 of them had...
... Keep breathing, that's the important part. After that, everything else will be a bit easier. You'll be in my thoughts and prayers. I wish you safe ...
This took longer than 10 minutes, but I was really having fun with it. Anyway, trying to catch up on the topics (A goal I've set for myself). Will be posting...
Wowsers! That Efreet story was EXCELLENT. I would say downright inspirational. Critique? None required (except maybe that possess was spelt wrong - big...
Oh, dear. How did she lose the charm? Why did she ride the thing? Wasn't it enough just to raise it? One problem: "She saw herself entering the city again...
In a message dated 6/21/04 11:28:04 AM Eastern Daylight Time, ... Maybe "She again saw herself entering the city for the first time" would be the meaning......
Three-in-one submission ... Unrestrained Power Dream Controller Renegade Priest I wanted to write this one up 2 weeks ago, but didn't find the time until now....
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