The Quest "OK," Alice grumbled, staring at her computer screen. "I vowed my next fantasy novel would be more realistic -- but how do I do it?" Her legs...
Hi all. I accidentally deleted this msg when I went to approve it (all posts from new members are moderated). Sorry, Will. From now on your posts aren't...
Hi all. How was your Halloween? The girls had such a blast. We figured out the costume problem. Morgan (5 1/2) was a cheetah girl. Jasmine (4) was a...
This makes me laugh! It reminds me of Lord of the Rings II where Gimli is talking about dwarf women. This is very funny. Are you new here? If you are, welcome!...
I think this story is missing big pieces, but I can't see them yet. Once I can. I'll rewrite the story, including them for a more coherent picture. Obviously,...
I'm in this year! I think I've become physically incapable of sitting it out. Good to hear there are others here involved, too. Anyway, I'm currently closing...
Hi JacLyn!! I've been lurking for a loooong time, so you may not remember me. Anyway, your girls do sound adorable! I worked Halloween night, but my son-in-law...
... I went to the nerd societes' (anime society, scifi society, rpg society) Halloween party on Saturday. I was a demonic puppet/schoolgirl. My face was white...
Sounds like a not-baddish outfit. I went in the scariest thing I could and frightened a lot of kids. I went as myself. ... Maya * That was hard to explain,...
... Thankie. It was really bad-ass. ^_^ ... ^_^ Hehe! Oooh, spooky... _maija _________________________________________________________________ The new MSN 8:...
I've been MIA for a while, I know. I'm sorry about that. For the past few months my time has been taken up with moving, getting organized, work, sticky family...
Thank you. I can definitely fix the "thats" in my story. Among other things. :) Joy Close <joyismirthful@...> wrote:I've been MIA for a while, I know. I'm...
... Hello Everyone, I've been on this group for a couple months, but don't think I've posted before. So 'hi'. I'm doing NaNoWriMo for the first time this year...
Wow, sorry I'm not in a critiquing mood. I need to recover a little more before I can really be analyzing. I think that the double peak in the first paragraph...
Jessica, I just have to say, your critiquing methods are horrible, but I love the encouragement you offer. Thank you. Whatcha recovering from? NaNo? Tim ...
lol No actually I had a nasty viral throat infection that became a sinus infection. And I'm on an antibiotic which makes it a little bit harder to think. I'll...
This is quite descriptive, and has a most unexpected ending! Now that I'm in critting mode though, lol, I can give a little more advice. The interjection about...
Are you up to the challenge of reading a book and WINNING $50 CASH? Then this contest is for you! What better way to read a book knowing you are on a treasure...
She lifted the parchment in her left hand skyward again. Holding it aloft, she stared again at the intricate design stenciled around the border. Well, around...
Timothy Halligan
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Nov 10, 2003 8:38 am
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Timothy, you are a cruel person. A torn map is one thing, but a truncated story? (VBEG) Timothy Halligan <lowflyingobject@...> wrote: She lifted the...
This was not written in 10 minutes, or anything close to it. (I may write short, but I don't write quick. Though the editing was basically while I wrote,...
Ooh, very nice! This one made me literally LOL, which isn't something I say often. Two minor quibbles (feel free to ignore them, of course): The second...
... second sentence "reads" a bit slow to me, and I think 'counter the weight to' might make more sense as 'counter the weight of'. You're right, that second...
... Retrochronal Intervention "Better than therapy," Jerry said, grabbing the reins of his autochronoadjuster and retrophasing into the past. "Eliminate a ...
Retrochronal Intervention ~~~~Love this especially the great twist at the end.. great stuff ~ Mairi "Better than therapy," Jerry said, grabbing the reins of...
Wow! Great story, but I can't believe how you left us hanging! ahhhhh! Oh well, I'll get over it. > "It's just that I NEED the rest of the map to finish,"...
Now this made me laugh. The humor at the end is hilarious. My main suggestion is to change Olivi's name, but that could just be my preference. In my mind, I...
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