Hey there. Sorry this is so long in getting to you. I've been quite busy. ... From: stefxs49 To: Fantasybits@yahoogroups.com Sent: Monday, July 28, 2003 10:38...
Hiya!! Don't need to apologise, glad to get any sort of feedback on my writing. I just wish I had enough time to respond to all the things I would like to....
Oh, yes, it sounds like you're carrying quite a load. Congratulations on writing as much as you have. :-) Little boys and girls can be quite the handfuls,...
Rest? We don't need no steenkin' rest! I truly believe sleep is overrated, and that high levels of caffeine and nicoteine can rejuvenate the body just as well...
Hi all, I know, it's a topic from a while back, but I'd been wanting to write something for it since I first saw it. Couldn't decide who I wanted to be in it,...
That's a sweet story :) It does leave me with a sense of foreboding, though, at the end because of the way that people talk about wishes coming true, not...
Thank you. :) I know that one bit was awkward, I guess I could have done it better with "She had already helped" or somesuch. It's important that he never say...
Hi all. I received this on another of my lists and thought I'd pass it on. :) JacLyn ... _________________________________________________________________ ...
... wrote: I liked this. There were some odd turns of phrase (so miserable was he) and you might have been better to start with her worries about the ghost, ...
The paper crackled as Hans turned the page. Typical...bomings, shootings, death, sex, drugs... He threw the page down in disgust and returned his recliner to...
... wrote: Nice story. I think you could play up how the loss of his wife changed things. You got some nice pathos on that through his grumbling (well done -...
Hey there. My one nit with this story is that it almost seems to happen too fast. The fey boy seems to appear much too quickly, but I also realize that this is...
The sky was dark overhead, but off the end of the pier, the water was even darker. My hands were tied behind my back with plastic cords. Altmann looked down at...
... [I think] Close by, the ... [too long a sentence] Damn good! A heroic prompt sub. Top notch! Mark http://groups.yahoo.com/group/critical_writing...
A very cool concept you have here, Krys! I'm sold to the idea of a cloth spread over people to protect them - it must be a big cloth, ne? ^_~ Or magical. Great...
Very intriguing. Are you going to continue this? I have no comments or crits as such, I'm just interested. ... Yes! What, why, where? I want to know, too! ...
I have to admit that I liked the first version of this story better. I liked the clinic, official approach. I have to say, though, that it would be interesting...
Hi, Fay, and welcome to the group! Sorry that I'm so late in commenting, but I'm now trying to go through my inbox. I've been a member for two years now, but I...
You've really been active sending these stories of yours - perhaps one day I will, too. <sigh> Anyway, I think the ending of this one is a bit over the top....
Nice to have a story featuring an older character for a change. Beautifully done, especially the ending chapter. Very well written story about the banality of...
Yay, Dan wrote! And it's Jenny! I want to congratulate you once again for your superb skill of writing dialogue and also of introducing characters with a few...
This is for an old topic and also the story itself is old, written to another writing group (in which my Fool Damon got life, among others). So this is written...
Hiya Tim! I really like new takes on the whole vampire mythos, and loved what you did with it. A nicely atmospheric piece. I'm quite a fool for vampires, so...
Hmmm, you have a good idea for a story here, the style could just be worked on a bit. For example, did you write this story in a hurry? There are quite a lot...
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