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maja sofie johansen
maja_sofie@...
Feb 2, 2002 6:21 pm
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"Mark my words, Aellie," my Gramma once told me. "Marry a soldier or a minstrel, and you'll be a happy woman. Minstrel's make love like it's a song. And...
I have been the lurker for over 6 months now. I apologize and plan on critiquing posts as soon as I can. Here's my humble offering to the list, somewhat on the...
This is just me catching up and critiquing, tho everyone seems to have expressed my thoughts all ready...So I will say wonderful job on all of these stories,...
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S.C. Ayers
somaoe@...
Feb 3, 2002 9:17 am
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Complete quote: "Happiness is the only true evil, Chandra, because it raises your hopes and leaves them dying in the dirt... No good comes of fostering such...
Hello again! This message is for those who commented on my recent posts (sorry for the delay on my end, but my internet went down for a few days. Always...
Gah... I've been through the feudal system like a hundred times in school, but still I didn't recognize the word 'fealty' as related to that thing.... So I...
... Linguistically or practically? Linguistically, you'll need to check with the Oxford Unabridged. It flows, I believe, from the same medieval English word...
Hi, This is my first post anywhere. I've only recently gotten brave enough to write anything down, though I have been dreaming up stories in my mind for...
Well folks, I think I'm officially and fully back, now-- I've spent most of my free time (little of it that there is) over the last few days scribbling down...
I don't know if this is considered spam, but I've recently started a list for the discussion of mythological creatures, such as fairies, mermaids, elves,...
... Hi Tom, this was a pretty good beginning. I like the idea of a character who wants to feel emotion but can't. My main suggestion would be to work on your...
I know its been awhile since I've posted any of this story, but I've been writing for a bit without any feedback so I could focus on getting further ahead with...
Hey Tom, glad you've decided to expose your work. It's a good idea to get many critiques and you can figure out what you've done and haven't done. Rich was...
"What are you doing? Beran and Gyth are locked up by those damned priests and you waste time nosing about in the woods like a pig hunting mushrooms! We have to...
... Aaaaargh! I hate you! ;) No, seriously, I don't. But I should've said: "how could that have anything to do with feudal?" Perhaps then it would've been...
My novel 'When Dark Winds Blow' is currently competing in the gallery competition at Del-Rey. If you have nothing better to do, I'd appreciate a vote! ...
... Hum... hang on, are you bribing us to vote for a novel we haven't read? I mean, I'm no Professor of Ethics at Oxford University, but isn't there something...
I read the first chapter and skimmed through part of the second; it's pretty good. April -- On Tue, 12 Feb 2002 14:42:52 ... Go Get It! Send FREE Valentine...
Thanks April. Anytime you'd like me to read anything you might have, let me know. Mike Nelson ... __________________________________________________ Do You...
No. The first three chapters are posted--that's what your voting for. I'd never sacrifice artistic dignity. In fact, if there's another novel on the site...
Hi all. Sorry for the lack of a new topic lately. My family has been getting sick and passing it around for a while. Anyway, the new topic is: a pegasus...
I don't really ever name pieces unless a name comes to me. So, in light of that, here is my namesless pegasus piece inspired by the idea of wings of a ...
Okay, so that title kind of applies to almost everyone in this group. ;) Anyway, I just started a new interactive story group and thought I've send a group...
Alright, well, I don't think I've seen any previous sections of this story, so I've just gone with what I have. I found it a facinating story and easy to keep...
... The first three chapters are posted--that's ... Oh. It's just that you said your 'novel' is competing, and I thought you meant a whole novel... I don't...
Hi all... Before I begin my story fragment, i think i should introduce myself. My name's Stef, so Hi everyone. phewww! Always find the intro's the hardest ...
Well, it's a little more than than 'just an internet competition', but I see your point. Mike Nelson ... __________________________________________________ Do...
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