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Dragons@yahoogroups.com
May 4, 2008 9:51 am
1533
I would like to know what you think of the first part of my unfinished 103 page book. Here it is: The Legacy "299 years ago, Link, the hero of time, destroyed...
As a reader, I have to say, the page have too many keywords in it..too many important information. The text need more elaboration for each events/ situation....
I think that you should separate the story and the information about Ocarina of Time separate. It would help to define the line between the story and the book....
Well, the ocarina and the stones all have something to do with the story and all items appear later in the book. In the book you would need the ocarina to...
but it only has three characters(ma, pa and roran) and thought they are important only one plays continuous role through out the book. I dont .... hmm... i...
It captured me right away. I love the Zelda games. What I was saying was that you should separate the story that the mother tells and the actual story. It...
I think you have a great story idea, but how you're starting it isn't good. Launching straight into a long narrative like that without any kind of scene...
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Dragons@yahoogroups.com
May 18, 2008 10:11 am
1541
I completely understand what you are saying but might I say, you should have seen err... read what it was like at first. but you have to keep in mind i wrote...
Drack silver <dracksilver@...> wrote: It captured me right away. I love the Zelda games. What I was saying was that you should separate the story that...
Sure, I'll read more. And if you want, I can highlight points that need work, if you like, and send it back. That is what I had my own siblings and Mom do with...
Sorry if my previous reply is kinda harsh but I couldnt be less harsher whenever I need to critisize people. Here are the 'cleaner' comments bout your work....
Sure. I would love to see more of your writings. But for your information, i really envy you that you could write down your stories like that and you have such...
just like soap dramas..haha. They are good at making people wait and hanging. I do have a story of my own, but its just in drafts and sketches. Plus, I wanna...
I agree, writing is writing and thats kinda our topic right now so im pretty sure we all want to hear it, or read it, i mean. What is it about? im sure we'ed...
The title is Kingdom of Dragons. In my story, dragons were no longer exist in daylight. They hid themselves between the shadows of mountains and forests .But,...
I am so drawn in and intrigued. It sounds amazing and you want to turn it into a movie, right? I thinnk thats what you said. and if it sounds like im being...
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