Title: The Beach House(Part four)
Rating: pg13(Language)
By: Cheryl Fite
Date: 01/30/2000
Description: Scary
Charters:  Famous people playing teens! *Yay!*

~ Current time ~

He kissed her running his hands over her back then
under her shirt onto her stomach. She then pulled
away, "Lets stop, this is wrong." She looked around
the room breathing deeply, in fear of getting caught
by someone. "Why? It’s not like anyone will find us."
Ryan smiled at Jennifer and looked at the piles of
laundry around them. "And if you lose your shirt
there’s plenty available." He kissed her again then
stopped knowing how uncomfortable she was and took her
by the hand and led her out of he laundry room.
"So when do I get to meet your friends hon?"
"Oh, well pretty soon I guess, I think I’m here to
stay this time." She smiled and held his hand.
"Well what a coincidence."
"What do you mean?" she asked.
"I mean if you’re staying here, than I may as well."
"Oh Ryan!" she hugged him and kissed his cheek. "I
love you so much!"
"I love you too." He hugged her back. "What would you
think about getting married?"
"Married?!" she exclaimed. "I’m only 18! Though…" she
thought about the name Jennifer Phillippe and thought
it worked good, "…if we do love each other." She
smiled and hugged him again.
"Well lets not rush, I mean if you feel you’re to
young…"
"On nonsense you’re 20, that’s pretty young too." She
interrupted.
"Yeah, so you really wanna do it?" he asked.
"Yes." She answered.
"Great!" He hugged her tight and kissed her.

~ Later that day ~

"So Seth," Drew smiled, "how long have you liked me?"
He scuffled slightly and put an arm around her waist,
"Ever since I laid my eyes on you."
She pushed him away and giggled, "Grose, we were like
five then!"
He grinned and rolled his eyes holding onto her hand,
then nodded his head slightly, "True, but still then
you were cute." He pinched her cheek teasingly.
"Yup, yup, yup." She said folding her arms and laying
back in his arms. She looked around Seth’s room. It
looked different from the last time she was in there.
The walls were panted blue now, before he had pink
wallpaper with little flowers, on it from were his
sister shared his room with him. He lived in a small
house, with his dad, his mom and sister moved away a
year before. His mom didn’t say were she was going and
why, and she just took his sister. By this time Seth
was glad that his mom didn’t take him with her, she
obviously didn’t love him, or so he thought.  His dad
was never home, he had two jobs, and they were real
crappy jobs, with little pay, but some how they
managed, and Seth was pretty content.
They laid there staring at the ceiling for about five
minutes then the door bell rang and Seth jumped up and
ran to the door, only to see Jennifer and some guy he
didn’t know standing there.
"Drew’s mom said she was over here, is she?" Jennifer
asked quickly.
"Um yeah, Come on in," he looked at the tall boy with
dark blond curly hair, the boy didn’t smile. Jennifer
and the boy stepped in, and she looked at Seth,
  "This is my boyfriend from Boston that I’ve been
telling everyone about, his name is Ryan." Ryan
extended his hand to Seth and smiled slightly, "Hello,
and your name is?"
"My names Seth." He shook Ryan’s hand then went to go
get Drew. He came back with her and they were holding
hands, Drew looked at Jennifer then smiled at Ryan
already knowing who he was, then hugged him. "Hello,"
"Hello, you must be Drew." He said in a deep voice.
"I am," she smiled then looked to Jennifer. "So what’s
the deal?"
"Oh umm," Jennifer stuttered a bit a first, "Well, me
and Ryan are getting married!"
"You’re kidding!?!?!" Drew squealed and hugged
Jennifer then Ryan again. "That’s great, I’m so happy
for you two!" Seth nodded his head in agreement.
The four stepped outside then started to walk over to
the nearby park, Drew looked over Seth’s shoulder and
saw the old homeless man laying on a bench  across the
street, Drew looked away from him and squeezed Seth’s
hand, he looked at her and smiled slightly.
"We can’t think of when to have the wedding.."
Jennifer gossiped with Drew at the park.
"He wants to have it in September, and he won’t tell
me why, but he just wants it then, but I want it in
February, because ya know valentines day and stuff."
She sighed, "What do you think?"
Drew stared off into the park, thinking to herself
about Seth, then the old man wondering what he wanted
from her. She too sighed deeply, still staring off
into the park.
"Drew are you okay?" Jennifer asked her concerned.
Drew broke out of her daze and glanced at Jennifer,
"Oh yeah, I’m just fine." She shook her head.
Jennifer frowned, "Okay."

~I wrote this the other day just couln't get this damn
puter to work, hehe~

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Terrible subject header, but the best I could do without thinking
about it for hours upon hours.

At my website, I am trying to compose a list of individuals willing to
beta read (in any fandom, you can be specific or general), and was
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Subject: [Beta_Unlimited] Beta Reader Database
Date: Wed, 2 Feb 2000 12:55:58 -0500

Terrible subject header, but the best I could do without thinking
about it for hours upon hours.

At my website, I am trying to compose a list of individuals willing to
beta read (in any fandom, you can be specific or general), and was
wondering if anyone on this list would be interested in being part of
this 'database' (for lack of a better word). If you are interested,
please let me know!



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I just got this out of Lois's Daily Planet Site to tell you the truth, if I
ever met that woman I would just kiss her, I would.  No one, I mean *no one*
can get the news faster than she had!  Good thing I bookmarked her site a
long time ago.....

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SATURDAY, FEBRUARY 19

  THE PRETENDER -- (8-9 p.m.) -- (TV-14)

  “Lifeline”

JAROD MEETS A FELLOW “PRETENDER” WHEN HE HELPS AN ATF  AGENT --

Jarod meets a kindred spirit when he comes to the aid of a young woman, Jenna
McGann (guest star Laura Cayouette), and discovers that she's an undercover
ATF agent who pretends to be the devoted fiancé of a murderous gun dealer
named Roland Pritchard (guest star Peter Onorati, “Murder One”).   After
Jarod wins Roland's trust by disguising himself as Jenna’s bodyguard, he
learns that Jenna’s cover may have been compromised by her  overly ambitious
ATF partner (guest star Marco Sanchez, “seaQuest DSV”), who has put
Jenna’s
young daughter (guest star Karissa Thoma) in “protective custody” to insure
that she will finish the case.   Elsewhere, Miss Parker and Broots  suspect
that Mr. Raines may be re-testing a lethal gas that the Centre first
developed in the 1980s.   Patrick Bauchau also stars.

Dum-de-dum-dum.  Raines is back!!!!  I don't know, this episode didn't hold a
lot of appeal to me other than Raines, I guess everything is back to the way
it was...(drat, just when I thought it was going to get interesting ::Sigh::).

A.

hey everyone, my e-mail was blocked for a while there,
sorry bout that, so I didn't get a lot of mail, so if
you sent me something could you send it again? Thankz!
:)
Cheryl

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Hey everyone, I need a poem for my LA class. Were
supose-to find one that we like and memorize it then
tell it to the class, and it also has to be 20 lines,
so if anyone could suggest any poems, please send them
to me! :) thanks Bunches.
Cheryl AKA Prozak Gurl

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Name or Alias: Jessica

Fav shows: Buffy the Vampire Slayer, Angel: The Series, Charmed, Xena,
Hercules

Fav writers of fanfiction: Saber Shadow Kitten, Allison (others I can't
remember                            names)

Fav actors and actresses: David Boreanaz, James Marsters, Sarah Michelle
Gellar

Webpage Address: <a href="http://www.crosswinds.net/~forthefans">For The
Fans</a>
(In Progress)

Do you write fanfiction?: Of course

Do you beta-read: Of course

The fanfiction you will beta read: From any of my fav shows as stated above.

The ratings of fiction you will beta read: From G to NC-17

Hello,

I need a Beta-Reader for 2 of my fanfics...

The Buffy & Angel Love Chronicles

and

Heaven's Above


Anyone interested?
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Didn't do this earlier, sorry ::looks guilty::


Name or Alias: Mac

Fav shows: JAG, Doctor Who, Walker, Texas Ranger,
Buffy, The Vampire Slayer, Martial Law, The Avengers
(yes, it was a show), MacGyver, etc

Fav writers of fanfiction: Too many to name

Fav actors and actresses: David James Elliot,
Catherine Bell, John M. Jackson, Richard Dean
Anderson, Kathrine Hepburn, Audrey Hepburn, Anthony
Hopkins, Julia Roberts.

Webpage address: http://www.geocities.com/ngaiomw and
http://www.geocities.com/majormac_walker (this one is
currently under construction.)

Do you write fanfiction?: Yes.  I have one posted.

Do you beta-read: Yes, but I won't tell who for.

The fanfiction you will beta read: Definately anything
from my favorite shows, but I'll do grammer, spelling,
etc. for anything else.

The ratings of fiction you will beta read: From G to
NC-17.



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Name or Alias: Lenore

Fav shows: where to start...X-Files, Buffy, Angel,
Earth Final Conflict, Dawson's Creek, Felicity,
Roswell, Star Trek: TNG,

Fav writers of fanfiction: there's so many, and I
don't want to leave any out, so I won't name any!

Fav actors and actresses: from TV: everyone from the
shows listed above...Movies: Kate Winslett, Emma
Thompson, Claire Danes, Leonardo DiCaprio, Val Kilmer,
Kevin Spacey...

Webpage address:
http://www.angelfire.com/scifi/worldofX/index.html

http://www.geocities.com/Hollywood/Star/2525/index.html

Do you write fanfiction?: Yes, but I'm a new fanfic
author, and they are off with my betas right now...:-)

Do you beta-read: Yes

The fanfiction you will beta read: As long as it's not
slash, I'll read anything from my faves, esp X-Files


The ratings of fiction you will beta read: From G to
R.

Hope to get to help some of you out soon!



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Visit my X Files site at http://www.angelfire.com/scifi/worldofX/index.html

Get your David Duchovny fix at My DD page:

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Okay, first of all, I'm sorry to everyone who got this
before(over ICQ), but, I'm a greedy garet, and I wanna
get this out. ;0)
Okay, there's this wed site called Element, and it's
pretty much a music/message board for teens, and I
guess it's pretty cool, if you sine up, and take the
survey you get a free tape(okay it's not the best
tape, but it's good for something for free), also you
get a free gift every month(if you take the time to
fill out the suvey), AND if you refer people to join,
you get a certan amount of gift certificats-sp-, and
you can buy some stuff like cds or some other stuff...
anyways I just thought I'd tell ya and if you do
decide to sine up please tell them that I toled you
about it. Go to http://www.elementusa.com
My ID or user name is 161662
Thanks Lots and enjoy.
love
Cheryl

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Here's the love chronicles edits and suggestions. Like
it so far!

Lenore
--- Jessica <slayerangel@...> wrote:
> From: Jessica <slayerangel@...>
>
> Hello,
>
> I need a Beta-Reader for 2 of my fanfics...
>
> The Buffy & Angel Love Chronicles
>
> and
>
> Heaven's Above
>
>
> Anyone interested?
>
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> Jessica
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******
Mulder: Scully?
Scully: Yes?
Mulder: I love you!
Scully: Oh, brother......
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Hey everyone, I decided that it's time that I leave,
because of shcool and everything.... BUT, if you ever
want to talk to me about writing or anything, just
feel free to e-mail me TOP_fite@...
It was great, and maybe I'll be back this summer!
PEACE LOVE AND SHASTA MCNASTY!
Cheryl

~Don't give up dreams so easly, envolve otheres~

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-----Original Message-----
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Date: Wednesday, February 16, 2000 1:17 PM
Subject: [Beta_Unlimited] Leaving


>From: Prozak Gurl <top_fite@...>
>
>Hey everyone, I decided that it's time that I leave,
>because of shcool and everything.... BUT, if you ever
>want to talk to me about writing or anything, just
>feel free to e-mail me TOP_fite@...
>It was great, and maybe I'll be back this summer!
>PEACE LOVE AND SHASTA MCNASTY!
>Cheryl
>
>~Don't give up dreams so easly, envolve otheres~
>
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Hi everyone.

I just joined, and I was wondering about beta... of course.  <g>
Is this for those who want to beta, or those who need a beta reader?  I guess
you could say I'm both.  I'll beta for anyone with stories for Forever Knight,
Pretender, Highlander, Higlander: The Raven, X-Files, MacGyver, and or Kung Fu:
TLC.  I write stories in Pretender, Highlander and Highlander: The Raven, 
X-Files, and MacGyver. I write general to not so general, depending on the
fandom.  Please let me know what's acceptable.
Thanks,
Trelar

I just joined and i'm willing to betaread almost anything. More
specifically i X-files, Star Trek Voyager, Buffy, (the list is
endless) I am pretty good at grammer and stuff. I don't though like
to read any adult fiction though

Hello people,

      I really need a beta for an X-Files story, it's going to be
rated R probably, it's slash, but there's nothing particularly
descriptive in it.  If there's anyone out there that is willing to
beta a Pretender story, too, I'd so totally appreciate it.  The
Pretender will also be R, but there is no slash in it.  Please let
there be someone out there willing to help me out.    But, it's
easier to contact me at   trelar27@...  If there are any
questions as to what either are about before you get involved, just
send me a message.  I'd really appreciate some help.

Thanks in advance.

Trela

I would be interested in reading for you if you haven't found someone
already. I will warn you that this would be my first time.

Hello, all! I go by many names, such as the Morrigan,
Beaky, Kathryn Sedai, Queen of the Potato People, the
Holy Blob, and Beaky, but My most common name is Katie
Schaefer. I love fan fiction, and I mostly write
Highlander fan fic and MiSTifications. I have written
a piece of Doctor Who fan fiction, featuring a new
incarnation of the Doctor, who is a woman this time. I
need a beta reader for it, so if you love Doctor Who,
I would be most appreciative! I'm also writing a
crossover between Highlander and M*A*S*H, and
Highlander and MST3K.
----------Katie
P.S. I have a M*A*S*H fan fic list on Onelist, if
anyone's interested in joining.
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I also have two Yahoo clubs that center around fan
fiction, the Bard's Collegium and Doctor Who Fan
Fiction.
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<< I have written a piece of Doctor Who fan fiction,
featuring a new incarnation of the Doctor, who is a
woman this time.  I need a beta reader for it, so if
you love Doctor Who, I would be most appreciative!>>


ME! ::waves excitedly at a fellow Whovian:: I will.  I
love Doctor Who!

Mac (a Doctor Who, Scarecrow and Mrs. King, MacGyver,
and JAG maniac)


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Hi y'all.

Seeing as own personal beta-patrol are no longer available due to the demands of
school, I need a beta-reader who is familiar with "the Pretender", and has no
qualms about major angst. Any help would be *much* appreciated.

Schuyler.

*confuzzled*
ICQ: 22523293
[TICKLE-ME-ELMO]

Well there you go then..someone who likes early eighties cheeziness. I too used to watch all those shows, but then I'm too young to have taken anymore interest in them than a passing entertainment..although I do like a good 'Heart To Heart' now and then.

((((BIG HUGS))))

Alicia

Mac <ngaiomw@...> wrote:

From: Mac <ngaiomw@...>

<< I have written a piece of Doctor Who fan fiction,
featuring a new incarnation of the Doctor, who is a
woman this time.  I need a beta reader for it, so if
you love Doctor Who, I would be most appreciative!>>


ME! ::waves excitedly at a fellow Whovian:: I will.  I
love Doctor Who!

Mac (a Doctor Who, Scarecrow and Mrs. King, MacGyver,
and JAG maniac)


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Hi

I am still seeking a beta for a longish Arthurian slash story (about half
finished and in need of input).

E. Veinglory

Need a Beta Reader for Due South fanfic.  Story is rated R for
language and sexual activity (non-slash) and semi-graphic
descriptions of violence.   This story is also a mild crossover to
Profiler so any help there would be appreciated but not needed as
much.

Thank you kindly.
Kali

Hi there! I'll read your fic...

Oooh Due South and Profiler..two of my favorite porgrammes.. I'd love to read what you've got!

Alicia

L K S R <kalerian@...> wrote:

From: "L K S R " <kalerian@...>

Need a Beta Reader for Due South fanfic.  Story is rated R for
language and sexual activity (non-slash) and semi-graphic
descriptions of violence.   This story is also a mild crossover to
Profiler so any help there would be appreciated but not needed as
much.

Thank you kindly.
Kali

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I've written a what-if back history for the Marvel
  character Exodus (Bennet du Paris) and his friendship
  with the original Black Knight (Eobar Barrington)
  set during the 2nd Crusades. It was written in response
  to CFan's orphan Ideas board story challenge.
  I need some suggestions on how to break up a lengthy
  paragraph that's more what should go in there, then what
  actualy story, for the last two scenes, if could find
  someone who's willing to take a look at it, and help me
  wrap up the ending, I would be a very 'happy camper<g>
  The story can be found at (http://members.tripod.com/~Karrenia/
  barbarians.html)

Desperately needing a French beta reader to translate a short " the Pretender "
vignette. Any help would be much appreciated.

*stressed*
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YM: sparker_dahak
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Desperately needing a French beta reader to translate a short " the Pretender "
vignette. Any help would be much appreciated.

*stressed*
ICQ: 22523293
YM: sparker_dahak
[SCHUYLER]

" My signature is better than yours "

need a beta reader for a JAG/Doctor Who crossover I've been writing
(I'm on part four)and in interlude for the same series.

Mac

Unfortunate Memories Part 1
Samantha Rigliotti (kmalone614@...)
Rating: PG
Category: Action, Suspense, Intrigue, Shipper (Harm/Mac, Webb/????,
AJ/Other)
Summary: Kate and Meg return. Kate is accused of abandonment. Harm
discovers a secret about Meg€  '   '€  ˛s past. Harm and Mac are
forced to
grow
closer through tragedy.
Spoilers: A little here and there but nothing too bad except for
after season 1 and Boomerang Parts 1 and 2.
Disclaimers: None of these characters belong to me in any way, shape
or form. All rights go to Donald P. Bellisario and whomever else he
works for.
Note to the Readers: This is my first attempt at Fanfic about
anything so please be nice!:) There was a weird problem in
transfering this from WORD so when there is supposed to be a "" there
is this weird E looking thing. Sorry for the confusion, i'll have to
fix that next time.


0900am
Admiral€  '   '€  ˛s Office
JAG Headquarters
Falls Church, Virginia

€  '   '€  łCommander Rabb and Colonel MacKenzie reporting as ordered
sir€  '   '€  ´ Harm
said as Mac and him entered the Admiral€  '   '€  ˛s office.

€  '   '€  łSit down Commander, Colonel.  We have just gotten word
from Webb
that he would like to speak to you and the Colonel as soon as
possible and he€  '   '€  ˛s on his way over here right now. Now,
whatever
Webb
is up to, don€  '   '€  ˛t let him talk you into anything you
don€  '   '€  ˛t want
to do.
We know he was a way of doing that sometimes.  So, just be
caref-€  '   '€  ´,
Admiral Chegwidden was interrupted by Webb loudly entering his
office. Tiner was standing at the door just behind him.

€  '   '€  łSorry sir, I tried to tell him you were in a meeting with
Commander
Rabb and Colonel MacKenzie but he wouldn€  '   '€  ˛t
stop.€  '   '€  ´ Tiner
explained,
hoping he wouldn€  '   '€  ˛t be at the receiving end of the
Admiral€  '   '€  ˛s
wrath as
he had been lately.

€  '   '€  łThank you, Tiner, Dismissed. Webb, do you ever
knock?€  '   '€  ´ he
asked,
quite disgusted.

Webb just began to speak, €  '   '€  łCommander, I have some
unfortunate
news
concerning Lt. Austin, and some good news concerning Lt. Austin.
Which would you like to hear first?€  '   '€  ´

Harm eyed Webb wearily, €  '   '€  łWhat€  '   '€  ˛s the bad news,
Webb?€  '   '€  ´

€  '   '€  łLt. Austin has been accused of espionage on three
accounts. With
the
Russians, Vietnamese, and Iranians.€  '   '€  ´

Harm flew out of his seat, lunging at Webb. Mac jumped up at the same
time, knowing he would get mad, and somewhat successfully held him
back The Admiral stepped in between the two men.

€  '   '€  łSTAND DOWN, COMMANDER€  '   '€  ´ he yelled.

Harm backed away from Webb and paced over to the corner of the office
to gather himself. Mac followed him there.

€  '   '€  łHarm, don€  '   '€  ˛t let Webb get to you. You know
that€  '   '€  ˛s what he
wants.
Knowing Webb, he€  '   '€  ˛s probably exaggerating things. Are you
settled?€  '   '€  ´
she asked, placing her hand on his arm.

Harm took a deep breath, €  '   '€  łYes, I€  '   '€  ˛m
fine.€  '   '€  ´

Harm and Mac returned to where the Admiral was in Webb€  '   '€  ˛s
face.

€  '   '€  łNow Webb, what is this all about?€  '   '€  ´ he asked.

Webb backed away from the Admiral, straightened his tie and
said €  '   '€  łIt€  '   '€  ˛s like I said, Lt. Austin has been
accused of
espionage on
three accounts.€  '   '€  ´

€  '   '€  łAnd, the good news, Webb?€  '   '€  ´ Harm asked.

€  '   '€  łWell, Lt. Austin has requested that you defend her.
You€  '   '€  ˛ll
get to
see her again.€  '   '€  ´

Now it was the Admiral€  '   '€  ˛s turn to jump at Webb. This time,
no one
tried to stop it. €  '   '€  łWhat the heck do you think
you€  '   '€  ˛re doing,
Webb?
Coming into my office, upsetting one of my officers and now, telling
one of MY lawyers under MY command that they€  '   '€  ˛re going to
defend a
client. Last time I checked, I was the Judge Advocate General and you
were a snitchy agent who can€  '   '€  ˛t find anything better to do
with
his
time than come in here and wreak havoc on this office. Now,
I€  '   '€  ˛m
fairly certain nothing has changed since I saw you last so I suggest
you sit down and let me run JAG before I haul your butt out of here
so fast, you won€  '   '€  ˛t know what happened. Is that
clear?€  '   '€  ´

Webb squirmed uncomfortably, €  '   '€  łSir, I€  '   '€  ˛m not
under your chain
of
command but I will try to do my best to aggravate you
further.€  '   '€  ´

€  '   '€  łYeah, like that€  '   '€  ˛s going to happen,€  '   '€  ´
Admiral said under
his
breath, €  '   '€  łnow, Webb, will you leave my office. I can handle
it
from
here.€  '   '€  ´

Webb started to say something, but quickly stopped when he saw the
look on the Admiral€  '   '€  ˛s face. €  '   '€  łYes sir. Goodnight
Commander,
Colonel.€  '   '€  ´
And then he left the office.

Admiral Chegwidden sighed deeply, €  '   '€  łAll right, now that
that€  '   '€  ˛s
taken
care of, let me tell you what€  '   '€  ˛s really going
on.€  '   '€  ´

€  '   '€  łYou knew about this sir?€  '   '€  ´ Harm asked
incredulously.

€  '   '€  łYes Commander, I did, and I really didn€  '   '€  ˛t
think it was my
duty to
tell you every little thing that comes through this office, do
you?€  '   '€  ´

€  '   '€  łNo sir, I just thought-€  '   '€  ´
€  '   '€  łGood, because its not.€  '   '€  ´ the Admiral
interrupted, €  '   '€  łNow,
here€  '   '€  ˛s the
information I have. Lt. Austin has been working on the inside for JAG
for sometime now, but she hasn€  '   '€  ˛t been in contact with this
office.
It€  '   '€  ˛s been directly with Webb.  She has been posing as the
US
Ambassador to Russia for almost three and a half years now. She had
been ordered to contact Webb twice a week with any information she
had.  After not hearing from her for 3 weeks straight, they looked
into it and it seemed she€  '   '€  ˛d disappeared. After doing
research,
they
found her tied to many major falls of American officers in Russia,
Vietnam, and Iran. Most of those pertaining to you and the Colonel.
They are still trying to locate Lt. Austin and believe she is
somewhere in Siberia. That€  '   '€  ˛s pretty much all I know. And,
before
you
ask it, yes, commander, I have been planning for you to defend Lt.
Austin but first we have to find her. Colonel Mackenzie, you will be
assisting the Commander. And of course, where Webb falls into place.
He has requested that you two be briefed over Lt. Austin€  '   '€  ˛s
last
whereabouts and continue the search. You don€  '   '€  ˛t have to
accept.
It€  '   '€  ˛s
just Webb and you never know what€  '   '€  ˛s behind it.€  '   '€  ´

€  '   '€  łWe€  '   '€  ˛ll accept€  '   '€  ´ Harm said
immediately. Colonel Mackenzie
nodded in
agreement.

€  '   '€  łAll right then, you two leave at 1030. You better be on
your
way.
Dismissed€  '   '€  ´

€  '   '€  łAye sir€  '   '€  ´ Harm and Mac said in unison.

As Harm reached for the handle Admiral said, €  '   '€  łCommander,
Colonel,
be
careful.€  '   '€  ´

€  '   '€  łWill do, sir€  '   '€  ´ Mac replied, as the two officers
exited the
Admiral€  '   '€  ˛s
office.  They were walking through JAG headquarters towards their
offices to make the arrangements of their case loads while
they€  '   '€  ˛d
be
gone.  Soon after, Harm came to Mac€  '   '€  ˛s office door and
leaned on
the
door panel, €  '   '€  łYou ready?€  '   '€  ´ he asked.

€  '   '€  łYeah, just one minute.€  '   '€  ´ she said, quickly
picking up the
phone and
dialing a number she seemed to know well.

€  '   '€  łMic?€  '   '€  ´ she said into the phone. Harm rolled his
eyes and
exited her
office, closing the door behind him.

€  '   '€  łBrumby? I thought she was over him. Sure, she still wears
that
ring,
but come on. The guy€  '   '€  ˛s a jerk, Mac.  We can all see that,
why
can€  '   '€  ˛t
you?  Then again, I may be just a bit biased against
him€  '   '€  Ąand for
Mac€  '   '€  ´

Mac hung up the phone about ten minutes later and exited her
office. €  '   '€  łYou ready, Harm?€  '   '€  ´

€  '   '€  łYeah, let€  '   '€  ˛s go. We only have
about€  '   '€  Ą'€  ´

€  '   '€  łFifty-seven minutes and thirty-three seconds€  '   '€  ´
she rattled
off. Harm
just shook his head as they entered the elevator to go down to the
parking lot.

They stood their in silence for a few seconds before Harm spoke
€  '   '€  łMac,
you don€  '   '€  ˛t have to do this you know.  She€  '   '€  ˛s my
friend, my old
partner.€  '   '€  ´

Mac nodded, €  '   '€  łI know, but you€  '   '€  ˛re MY friend, and
MY partner, so
I want
to.€  '   '€  ´

Harm smiled, €  '   '€  łThanks.€  '   '€  ´

€  '   '€  łIts not a problem€  '   '€  Ąas long as you promise not
to attack
anyone who
offends you. It might hurt your reputation for people to know that
your female partner has to hold you down from fights,€  '   '€  ´ she
said
teasingly.

He looked equally amused, €  '   '€  łFemale, yes. But also marine.
As long
as I
tell them €  '   '€  ±Mac€  '   '€  ˛, the marine, held me down,
they€  '   '€  ˛ll never
know the
difference.  Unless they see you of course, then they€  '   '€  ˛d
definitely
know.€  '   '€  ´ he said with a twinkle in his eye.

Mac rolled her eyes, €  '   '€  łMen€  '   '€  ´ And with that, they
were on their
way to
their houses to pack.



1000am
Webb€  '   '€  ˛s Apartment
Virginia


The phone rings four times to an empty house, €  '   '€  łHello,
you€  '   '€  ˛ve
reached
Clayton Webb. I€  '   '€  ˛m not available right now, so leave a
message
after
the beep€  '   '€  ´ BEEEEEEEP
€  '   '€  łHi Clay, its Kate. I know you€  '   '€  ˛re not home but
I wanted to
call you
and thank you for dinner last night. I had a wonderful time. I hope
we can see each other again soon. Talk to you later, bye.€  '   '€  ´



1030am
Dulles International Airport
Washington D.C

€  '   '€  łWelcome passengers to flight 331 flying from Washington
D.C,
America
to Moscow Russia. Please fasten your seatbelts and secure all luggage
in the over head compartment.  Keep the trays in front of you in the
upright position until we reach a steady altitude. Thank you, and
enjoy your flight€  '   '€  ´

Harm and Mac got settled in their seats as the plane began to take
off.
Harm looked longingly out the window. Mac noticed as she always did
when he had flying on his mind.

€  '   '€  łHey, you really miss it, huh? Even after you came back
and
everything. It€  '   '€  ˛s too bad you can€  '   '€  ˛t have the
best of both
worlds, huh?
A tomcat-flying JAG officer? Hmm, you never know, flyboy.€  '   '€  ´
she
said
with a smile.

€  '   '€  łGosh, I love that smile. So innocent, yet sexy. She
really is
everything I€  '   '€  ˛ve ever wanted in a woman. But
she€  '   '€  ˛s Mac; and
she has
that whole Brumby thing going on.€  '   '€  ´

Harm€  '   '€  ˛s thoughts were interrupted by the stewards standing
over
them, €  '   '€  łCommander Harmon Rabb, Jr. and Colonel Sarah
Mackenzie?
This
message just came to you from Washington D.C.€  '   '€  ´

€  '   '€  łThank you€  '   '€  ´ Mac said, taking the note. Quickly
reading over
it, she
turned and looked at Harm, €  '   '€  łGuess who?€  '   '€  ´

€  '   '€  łWebb€  '   '€  ´ he replied.

She nodded, €  '   '€  łHe says that the hotel we were supposed to
stay at
cancelled our reservations and they only hotel with any vacancies is
the one next to it,€  '   '€  ´ she said, looking obviously ticked.

Harm didn€  '   '€  ˛t know why, €  '   '€  łWhat? Is it not as nice
of a
hotel?€  '   '€  ´

€  '   '€  łOh, no, in fact, it€  '   '€  ˛s even nicer.€  '   '€  ´

€  '   '€  łWell, then what€  '   '€  ˛s wrong?€  '   '€  ´

She cleared her throat and began to read, €  '   '€  łThe hotel has
cancelled
your reservations and the only one with any vacancies is the one next
door. It€  '   '€  ˛s a much nicer hotel, but they only had one room
available.€  '   '€  ´

€  '   '€  łWell, its not like we haven€  '   '€  ˛t done the
€  '   '€  ±staying in the
same room€  '   '€  ˛
thing before. I€  '   '€  ˛ll take the couch, you have the bed, like
always.
Why
is this bothering you so much?€  '   '€  ´

She feigned a smile, obvious to him, €  '   '€  łOh, silly old me
forgot to
say
who the letter was addressed to, €  '   '€  łMr. and Mrs. Harmon Rabb,
Jr.€  '   '€  ´

End Part 1